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Topic: Man made disaster
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ProudLeo Knowflake Posts: 275 From: Aubrey, Texas, 76227 Registered: Aug 2013
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posted November 14, 2014 05:09 PM
I can't complain I've been doing the same thing I've felt the pain Of being traded away Still I play the game Busy making my own trades Is anybody sane? Is anybody sane? I think: This world is going down And we're driving it faster The first seat belongs to me There's no remedy In our Man-made disaster Craving green But the shade's never right, it seems Catch and release Next fling might be brighter green But soon it fades The same thing goes the same way Is anybody sane? Is anybody sane? I think: The world is going down And we're driving it faster The first seat belongs to me There's no remedy In our Man-made disaster
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3060 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted November 14, 2014 06:30 PM
Your poem! Contents remind me of Simone White sometimes... like Beep Beep SongIP: Logged |
ProudLeo Knowflake Posts: 275 From: Aubrey, Texas, 76227 Registered: Aug 2013
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posted November 14, 2014 07:03 PM
I've never heard of her before but I will look her up...thanks!IP: Logged |
Iced8Ace Knowflake Posts: 63 From: CA Registered: Aug 2014
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posted November 15, 2014 04:09 PM
I like how its written a bit vague but your natural tone is blunt. Good sense of balance. IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 798 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 15, 2014 11:28 PM
I like the rythym of this..IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 46746 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 19, 2014 09:27 AM
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ProudLeo Knowflake Posts: 275 From: Aubrey, Texas, 76227 Registered: Aug 2013
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posted November 21, 2014 05:31 AM
I'm glad you all enjoyed itIP: Logged |