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ProudLeo
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Posts: 275
From: Aubrey, Texas, 76227
Registered: Aug 2013

posted November 14, 2014 05:09 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for ProudLeo     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I can't complain
I've been doing the same thing
I've felt the pain
Of being traded away
Still I play the game
Busy making my own trades
Is anybody sane?
Is anybody sane?
I think:

This world is going down
And we're driving it faster
The first seat belongs to me
There's no remedy
In our Man-made disaster

Craving green
But the shade's never right, it seems
Catch and release
Next fling might be brighter green
But soon it fades
The same thing goes the same way
Is anybody sane?
Is anybody sane?
I think:

The world is going down
And we're driving it faster
The first seat belongs to me
There's no remedy
In our Man-made disaster

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mirage29
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From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted November 14, 2014 06:30 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Your poem!
Contents remind me of Simone White sometimes... like Beep Beep Song

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ProudLeo
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Posts: 275
From: Aubrey, Texas, 76227
Registered: Aug 2013

posted November 14, 2014 07:03 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for ProudLeo     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I've never heard of her before but I will look her up...thanks!

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Iced8Ace
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From: CA
Registered: Aug 2014

posted November 15, 2014 04:09 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Iced8Ace     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I like how its written a bit vague but your natural tone is blunt. Good sense of balance.

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Pearlty
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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted November 15, 2014 11:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

I like the rythym of this..

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Randall
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From: Saturn next to Charmainec
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posted November 19, 2014 09:27 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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ProudLeo
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Posts: 275
From: Aubrey, Texas, 76227
Registered: Aug 2013

posted November 21, 2014 05:31 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for ProudLeo     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I'm glad you all enjoyed it

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