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Topic: My sunset
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 533 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 24, 2014 10:53 PM
What I lost I cannot retrace Never will I win this case This selfish struggle for selfish ends Yet another voice calls me to march on Death is not the end, I shall merely be interrupted On my quest for selfless love I am here for as long as I'm needed, I will not linger nor be a heroine, No, I'll come back home Down the hill I go Into the sunset How I hate sunsets So sad to leave a poem With an end. But if a person doesn't have the breath To wait till dawn, then poor Is he who leaves in darkness.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 47129 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 25, 2014 10:49 AM
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 812 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 25, 2014 12:31 PM
I felt much realizations and strength in this poem. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 533 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 26, 2014 06:36 PM
Thank you for the replies.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3089 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted November 27, 2014 03:31 AM
Words with such deep meaning... Words are your oxygen, and companion-witness Be your richness. ... You exude Quality, always. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 533 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 27, 2014 10:55 AM
Thank you, Mirage, for such a warm hearted reply!IP: Logged |
Iced8Ace Knowflake Posts: 83 From: CA Registered: Aug 2014
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posted November 27, 2014 07:36 PM
The resolve in this poem resonates with me, thank you for crafting it IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 879 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 27, 2014 10:07 PM
'Then poor is who leaves in the darkess'These are so apt.. ------------------ I know you, for now, and I'll know you, for ever… .. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 533 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 29, 2014 09:43 PM
Thank you Iced8Ace and thequeen IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3089 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 01, 2014 04:53 PM
... We all get to Where we're supposed to be, in Beautiful Time IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 533 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 01, 2014 08:52 PM
It is true, Mirage. I have recently learned that Karma is the distance between where we are now and our destination. I hope that when one slides into the sunset, one is also sliding into the dawn of another day, an eternal one. That is the only way which can make me love sunsets. IP: Logged |