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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted December 03, 2014 11:49 AM            

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Retracing what has been seen
and loved through
amazes me
the soft gentleness
of pellucid feelings.

Some expressions,
we can't speak of lyrically
lying hidden
deep and sunken,
time pieces
too weighed down to hove.

Yet they do await
portent rising
from mystified
emblems of this love.

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posted December 03, 2014 06:49 PM            

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Gentle and lovely

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From: Antwerp, Belgium
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posted December 04, 2014 12:52 AM            

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Patient..
Now weighed down, potently waiting to rise up..

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From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted December 04, 2014 04:42 PM            

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... 'Pellucid'

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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted December 06, 2014 09:21 AM            

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Thanks

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From: Saturn next to Charmainec
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posted December 07, 2014 05:18 PM            

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posted December 07, 2014 06:56 PM            

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Quite beautiful.

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