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Topic: Like the placid lake
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 903 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 11, 2014 10:56 AM
Ever got addicted to the feeling of nothingness, To the feeling of an intense coldness that heats you again, Ever felt like it was what it appeared but never what it felt, To the disposition of making it real and blind, Hurricanes that turn into whirlwinds having no definitions, As I've no definition of what is twirling inside of me, There is this sensation, not so easy, not so perfect, Yet it is there, where I've to let it be, I see certain tears and certain joyous moments, And ask you ten thousand time, 'beloved will you speak', But you smile and smirk and look away, Into nothingness as if you were called from eternities and you could only watch in wonder, I stand around your fixed gaze, amazed, Do you love me, did you ever? You look at me in despair, with no feelings in heart, And shake your head in negation, for me to accept the news, And for you to get up and walk past as if you didn't crumble my heart, And me to be left lingering there, mourning in sadness, Till the night engulfs me and my hopes are destroyed and i could no longer see, From where I came or will reach, from where I loved you, From where I don't…from where we don't...IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 47862 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 12, 2014 01:31 PM
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3137 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 12, 2014 04:08 PM
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 563 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 14, 2014 10:19 AM
Nothing like a placid lake. Or is it that which lies underneath? Or is the false lover who is indifferent as the placid lake? If he is false, then these hpoes are better lost, and you are saved from nothingness. I liked the way you made equal the difference between that which is as it appears, not felt, and the blind and real.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 827 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 17, 2014 11:11 AM
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 903 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 17, 2014 03:23 PM
Thank you everyone … ---------- Ayelet, yes this represents the feeling of a placid lake. When we look at it, we see only the stillness and silence above, the undercurrents are too deep to be noticed, and felt…
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