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From: Ohio
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posted December 18, 2014 10:56 AM            

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I broke my own heart once
being in the wrong place,
wrong time, wrong everything
I didn't mean to..

Secrets coveted well
cherished from memory
never to tell
still return and quake
from time to time

I mistook complex
for ongoing distress
believing words
deriving from,
a dysfunctional mourning state
which wouldn't readily-
ever go away
the grit left over by him
upon my spirit.

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posted December 18, 2014 01:42 PM            

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The mourning lingering moments, and grits on spirit..

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posted December 19, 2014 01:32 PM            

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posted December 19, 2014 08:11 PM            

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Wow!... Another really wonderful poem Pearlty.

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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted December 20, 2014 10:24 AM            

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Thanks all!
If I don't get a chance to pop back in here beforehand.. Merry Christmas, to those who celebrate.

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posted December 20, 2014 11:59 AM            

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A poem different from other love poems of yours that i have read.. i wonder. Interesting. Exudes the feeling well. Happy holiday!

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posted December 20, 2014 12:36 PM            

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Thanks kindly Ayelet. Yes this one is different, I had it saved in my notes for awhile- words/thoughts from one of those "blah" kind of days.

Happy Holidays to you too!

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posted December 21, 2014 12:36 PM            

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Merry Christmas.

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