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Topic: Shadow...
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 950 From: Where There Is Only Sun Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 28, 2014 03:21 PM
Dreary a soul, walks beside, I cannot perceive, it’s presence it hides, A shadow so warm, soothing so cozy, You reveal yourself, in ways ever rosy, I chase you so, when you elope, Oh shadow so pious, grant me your hope, And caress my head, with your hands, Of your love so pious, like falling sand, It’s so fragile, beating of your heart, I can locate it, like pointing a dart, But on perceiving, a darkness I see, Which holds my heart, and I cannot feel, It showers some flowers, and makes me smile, I ask ‘who are you’, disappears for a while, Then comes again, capturing me in embrace, And asking with gestures, ‘do you love this maze’, Astonished I gaze, feeling so shy, In heaven I feel, in ways you try, A prismatic your tree, you plant in glee, Bearing fruits of your love, inside me, My chest palpitates, when you disappear, I wait in perplex, to perceive you near, Your love is my passion, and my strength, Oh shadow be with me, my heart’s in wrench.
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3170 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 29, 2014 04:12 PM
Breathless...TQ So poignant & Beautiful. You have a way with words. Says it all! ...I'm melting. IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 833 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 29, 2014 07:54 PM
Gorgeous! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 602 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 30, 2014 04:48 AM
A unique love Poem.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 602 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 30, 2014 04:54 AM
Reminds me of Greek mythology, and of love between a human and a god.IP: Logged | |