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posted February 07, 2015 06:04 PM            

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Winter

I ain't waiting for you no more,
I ain't waiting for no one.
The wind has taken away my hat of youth
and kissed my hair flashing silvery moonlight,
playing a tune of solidity and restraint
Also of imagination thrown into the pot
of my most important thoughts
which aren't mine, never have been,
have you?

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posted February 07, 2015 07:25 PM            

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Beautiful poem as usual, Ayelet! Much fullness in the 'sense' experience.

Sending you a hug! Your poem reminded me of this song...

(music) Time waits for no one (Michael Jackson, lyrics) [3:27] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IfpLDx1GyTk

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posted February 08, 2015 01:23 PM            

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Thank you for your comment and song, Mirage . A hug to you too!

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posted February 10, 2015 07:55 AM            

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Loved the vision of this...
"The wind has taken away my hat of youth
and kissed my hair flashing silvery moonlight"

Wonderful poem!

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posted February 10, 2015 04:22 PM            

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Thank you Pearlty

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posted February 19, 2015 01:59 PM            

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