Posts: 919
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted February 25, 2015 09:58 PM            

---

Finding a melodic beat
where sound
was once denounced
that's when you steep in me

Cup sipping full
no fancy words
other than our
solo emblems
echo and cry
back and forth

Lyrics and love
Our feast
Our own

Perils of us unclothed
the love
and poetry let forth..

Salted
Sweet
Born.

IP: Logged

Posts: 52314
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009

posted February 26, 2015 02:22 PM            

---

Awesome!

IP: Logged

Posts: 3479
From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted February 26, 2015 03:29 PM            

---

I it!

IP: Logged

Posts: 919
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted February 26, 2015 06:57 PM            

---

Thanks both of you!

I felt a little rusty with the poetry, I haven't been writing much of it this winter, I've been more into reading.

IP: Logged

Posts: 768
From:
Registered: Sep 2010

posted February 27, 2015 07:44 PM            

---

Strong, yet gentle...wild In a way.

IP: Logged

Posts: 919
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted February 28, 2015 10:11 AM            

---

Thanks Ayelet strong, gentle, and wild...
Great description and that's pretty much how I felt while writing.

IP: Logged

Posts: 3479
From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted March 01, 2015 02:36 AM            

---

Ahem!... and add Beautiful to that list?

IP: Logged

Posts: 919
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted March 01, 2015 08:26 AM            

---

Mirage...

IP: Logged

Posts: 3479
From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted March 01, 2015 02:54 PM            

---

Pearlty, Pearlty, Pearlty, Pearlty, Peartly! ... So Much {{{ }}}

IP: Logged

Posts: 919
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted March 01, 2015 04:44 PM            

---

Thanks sweet friend!!

IP: Logged

Posts: 43
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted March 01, 2015 11:29 PM            

---

It's pretty great, it really has a kind of subtle intensity.

IP: Logged

Posts: 1138
From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted March 03, 2015 05:56 PM            

---

This poetry has a strong sense of emotion, that travels pretty deep.
It reminds me of another poem I loved in this forum :
http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum17/HTML/002966.html

IP: Logged

Posts: 919
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted March 04, 2015 02:32 PM            

---

Thanks LF.. and Queen.

IP: Logged

Posts: 52314
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009

posted April 22, 2015 03:55 PM            

---

Love the format.

IP: Logged