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From: Al Da Beatz
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posted March 26, 2015 04:34 PM            

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Serene and calm, a step I took,
Laying so tranquil, behind valley I look,
So still it was, the foggy lake,
As moving of your eyes, while you were awake,
The distant I swayed, in stunning your smell,
The more inside, your bosom I dwell,
The gentle breeze, blew through my face,
Fascinating my glory, uniting our ways,
Your chaste and moral, touch I breath,
So kindled they were, your words beneath,
Exasperating my every, subdued desire,
I am hallucinating, with consequences dire,
You drove my vision, tempting me more,
Moving so far, alike ever before,
It was your, divine love I felt,
Making me so frail, my name you smelled,
Melodious it was, leaving your mouth,
Reviving my soul, feeling so proud,
Oh my love, forever stay,
It’s just you, kindling my way.

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posted March 27, 2015 08:53 AM            

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So very delicate and touching, the serene and calm feelings encircle while reading.

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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
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posted March 27, 2015 01:34 PM            

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Loves it.

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posted March 28, 2015 01:52 PM            

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The words flow.

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From: Al Da Beatz
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posted March 28, 2015 04:19 PM            

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Pearlty and Randall thank you both. I wrote this for my first love recently

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posted March 29, 2015 04:37 PM            

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^ t.q.!... I just love your work! Wish that were ME! What a Heart!!

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posted March 31, 2015 06:45 PM            

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Hi thequeen, I love this poem.

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posted April 01, 2015 09:35 AM            

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Lots of heart in that poem.

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From: Al Da Beatz
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posted April 01, 2015 11:30 AM            

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Thanks Mirage, Ayelet and Randall..

First love is always like that It's never the same again...

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