Posts: 1137
From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted April 16, 2015 08:33 AM            

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Who are you, sending these songs,
In molten my heart, where passion longs,
A vision of your silhouette, so that I could revive,
The purity of divinity, my love describes,
I see you so far, standing bewitched all hour,
You stand fixated, inhaling my power,
Yet I tread down, to from where the valley starts,
Surpassing all mountains, to enchant your heart,
The holy kindle, of your smell mesmerised,
And I fleeted from ground, flew to you twice,
You twirled around, gazed in my eyes,
Shuddering in shimmers, you drunk my sighs,
I eloped from valley, you spray a smile,
Spellbound I leave, enraptured each while,
They asked me so who was that with charm,
I sheepishly smile, and smirk at the alarm,
To ponder you row, a boat in lake,
Distancing me with water, and golden flakes,
The flakes I hold, and run with power,
The power of love, 'The Love of Our',
From the boat I saw, you blazingly shine,
In lake I dive, hunting you in diamond mines..

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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted April 16, 2015 04:43 PM            

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Each verse has its own 'stand out word' or a short phrase strewn together perfectly -which envelopes more and more consistent meaning found within the poem, yet it also reads as a beautiful timeless story.

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posted April 17, 2015 11:32 PM            

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A beautiful love poem, each phrase echoes the last.

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From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted April 18, 2015 04:39 AM            

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Thanks Pearlty and Ayelet..

The one thing in this poem that's unique is the object of admiration is still unknown and yet the passion grows so strong. How is that possible?? Is it a little whimsical to chase someone who distances you..? If so, then how does this stop, I'm sorry but I'm a little confused.

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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted April 18, 2015 11:45 AM            

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I wish I had a clear concise answer for you queen. It appears you're communicating at a soul level. Perhaps it's something left over from another time - other worldly? Maybe they haven't caught up with you here yet, but probably will. I agree it is confusing, because this is when logic is thrown to the wind and heart takes over. From tapping into that source poetry finds a very comfortable niche there. Inspiration, passion, musing, rhythms, and pulsation ... all these nurture our creative well-springs and teach us about Love.

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From: A Place on Earth
Registered: Feb 2014

posted April 18, 2015 01:20 PM            

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..the biggest thing for me,
is following the Heart Signs...

affirmatiions in
3's

flow

you're a11 Amazing POets!

I enjoy coming to this forum..
just haven't had the Time to
post...

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal

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From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted April 18, 2015 01:49 PM            

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Pearlty, I guess so.. that could put some sense in my head..but what if it's just meant to be in the dark till the end and you never get to know what happened.. Would we be left lingering or content with what happens? If so, then will the knot open, or hurt when it opens.. What if one day you wake up and realise it was a dream too long you slept in.. That there was no silhouette but a creation of your delusional mind.. I guess in such a case you'd understand and be sufficed at the beauty of your own creation that how far fetched your imaginations could be.. I guess at that point you can laugh at it and write yet another beautiful poetry or story about it...

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From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted April 18, 2015 01:54 PM            

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Originally posted by ballerina:
..the biggest thing for me,
is following the Heart Signs...

affirmatiions in
3's

flow

you're a11 Amazing POets!

I enjoy coming to this forum..
just haven't had the Time to
post...

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Heart rocks..as always.. Thanks for enjoying..

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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted April 18, 2015 07:02 PM            

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I'm very impressed with this one, you have quite a powerful vocabulary.

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posted April 20, 2015 11:46 PM            

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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
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posted April 21, 2015 09:18 AM            

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Well-written.

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