Posts: 1150
From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted April 27, 2015 05:26 PM            

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Enchanted in the path, often gazed you,
Turning so aghast, barely chased you,
Pondered distantly, your gentle ways,
Couldn’t resist my thought, in night or days,
Your gait I loved, I loved your feet,
Divine and holy, your prayers were neat,
Bleeding me out, pretending so sweet,
You took my soul, to plunder and cheat,
Captivating my heart, in several bars,
Decking it with some rotten flowers,
Some worms crawled by, and flies flew,
A pungent fragrance, from flowers blew,
You plodded my heart, with a spade,
Stuffed it with worms, some stinking baits,
And let go of chain, my heart rolled,
Devouring their meal, the worms crawled,
With some holes, bleeding few worms,
My heart was engulfed, with filthy norms,
You plundered so, I shed all shame,
And soared so high, nimble yet lame,
My heart you destroyed, as it disappeared,
On your clothes, with my blood you are smeared.

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From:
Registered: Sep 2010

posted April 28, 2015 07:50 AM            

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A powerful, tormented love poem.

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From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted April 28, 2015 02:45 PM            

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... so tragic

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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009

posted April 29, 2015 02:33 PM            

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Sad.

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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted May 01, 2015 11:02 AM            

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Melancholy, yet raw, expressive, and real.

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