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Topic: Fallen Angel
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Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 821
From:
Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 01, 2015 09:22 PM
  
Fallen AngelI wish I could save you
from myself
Having said that,
You can save me.
The night is so pale on your lip,
hanging there like a lost soul
Have you seen how far we are
from the ground?
Your wings weren't cut, my love, they weren't
broken and torn and tossed away
by whims, yours and others'
And so you lift me
when I don't care to show
off with my once-upon-a-time wings
All I care for is for the kids to never grow,
to never show hints of lies,
or play Halloween when it is perfectly bright, at
least inside
Nock nock nock, open the door,
trick or treat
tonight inside
your mind?
Have it the third way.
She shall be contented.
Mind her feet.
They grew so delicate since you lifted her.
Sometimes she had to walk.
Sometimes she had to crawl.
But that was then. Now
you mind
She feels
safe
as if she were
a flying angel
herself
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Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 937
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted May 02, 2015 09:19 AM
Such an angelic dialogue and beautiful- just like the writer of the poem.  IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 821
From:
Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 02, 2015 04:59 PM
Thank you so much  IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 3552
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted May 03, 2015 04:11 AM
 .... wow! I Love it. How sweet!IP: Logged |
LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 46
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted May 03, 2015 01:02 PM
Amazing, love how the way how the words are flowing.IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 821
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Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 04, 2015 07:08 PM
Thank you Mirage and LF DX IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 52754
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 05, 2015 02:04 PM
Absolutely love it!IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 3552
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted May 05, 2015 04:24 PM
Ayelet ...   (music) You Raise Me Up (Josh Groban, lyrics) [4:59] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oni0tO_HN30 IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 821
From:
Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 07, 2015 01:52 PM
Thanks Randall  Mirage  , the song is lovely and
really fits the feeling I was conveying...  IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 3552
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted May 07, 2015 06:25 PM
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