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From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted May 12, 2015 12:21 AM            

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Who are you, sensational as breeze,
Flowing in me, with depth of seas,
Your eyes spray divinity, I cannot look,
Shying away each moment, with a heart crook,
You don’t love me, o’ wicked love,
But I couldn’t resist, your pouring verve,
My fantasy is built, I entwine in it,
You are pulling me near, my passion is lit,
I tried to control, on my love in heart,
But you pull with grip, your looks are smart,
You have glow of passion, didn’t feel for age,
In your hermitage I live, dragged in your cage,
You left me now, don’t know my heart,
Oh my desires are boiling, with indifferent your part,
I loved you the moment, peeped in your eyes,
You kill my vows, I made myself to die,
I do not know, if I would see you again,
For you have captured my heart, I resisted in vain,
Forever this love, will have a corner of my chest,
I may fall off a cliff, you will stand of the rest.

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posted May 13, 2015 09:17 AM            

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Beautifully real proclamations from the heart's depths.

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From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted May 15, 2015 10:40 PM            

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TQ... So much passion! You seem to find the right words so often... In recent months, I went through a crushing deep heartache. I can 'feel' what you say. And it's all sooo true. Forever, in my chest, with a Love Everlasting.... I feel that, too.

Thank you soooo much for writing about your experiences. My Heart is reminded that is not the only Heart that has gained-lost hurt and Gained. No matter how much it hurts, Love Keeps. {{ }}

I do not know, if I would see you again,
For you have captured my heart, I resisted in vain,
Forever this love, will have a corner of my chest,
I may fall off a cliff, you will stand of the rest.
--thequeen
from, Pure Breeze

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posted May 15, 2015 11:37 PM            

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Passionate, the narrator, which is in the seemingly weak spot, is defeated perhaps, but not really hurt but strengthened.

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posted May 18, 2015 10:36 PM            

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...strengthened. I like the way you said that Ayelet!

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posted May 18, 2015 11:45 PM            

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From: Al Da Beatz
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posted May 19, 2015 05:31 PM            

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The narrator will not always be in weak spot, the writer has to rise above station of weakness, which is just illusionary.

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posted June 20, 2015 08:48 AM            

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Originally posted by thequeen:
The narrator will not always be in weak spot, the writer has to rise above station of weakness, which is just illusionary.

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posted June 23, 2015 02:48 PM            

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Originally posted by thequeen:
The narrator will not always be in weak spot, the writer has to rise above station of weakness, which is just illusionary.

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Weaknesses.... precarious mysterious places~~
to be left out-standing,
in-sense of the words

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