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Topic: This is How
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Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 944
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Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 19, 2015 02:43 AM
  
If I got lost
at least I was found
A broken member of a rhythm
The buzzing silhouette of a dance
The smile after "hello" is uttered
A glitter in a lover's eyes
just before love has sparked
A very green leaf
who hasn't yet learned
to be ashamed
when Autumn came
A piece of metal
once called "a ring"
now discarded
for children's play
A strand of hair
once glory, filth today,
Tommorow glory once more
on some bald woman's head,
It cannot grow, though, it is dead
I am the blood that stopped bleeding
after the wound got healed
The soft moonlight arriving
actually from the fierce sun
and all the spaces in a love letter,
all the words unspoken in between
This is how you found me,
caressed me with your thought
then let go
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mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 3801
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted May 19, 2015 03:58 AM
*bawling my eyes out* ... In your poem, "This is How"... You really know the way to communicate How This is. Your words always touch me, Ayelet, in the deep steep places.   IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 1005
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted May 19, 2015 09:22 AM
This is beyond words I can offer as a compliment. Glorious comes to mind though. The last six lines- amazingly touching with crescendoing emotion. IP: Logged |
LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 58
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted May 19, 2015 02:35 PM
Fantastic, the muse came strong with you on this one, it's quite powerful.IP: Logged |
ballerina
Moderator Posts: 102
From: A Place on Earth
Registered: Feb 2014
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posted May 19, 2015 03:17 PM
Ayelet So deeply connected
in her Universal House
She sparkles... ..that, is how I think of you ------------------
All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal IP: Logged |
thequeen
Knowflake Posts: 1231
From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted May 19, 2015 05:25 PM
Powerful thoughts - what's the significance of children playing with the ring. IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 944
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Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 19, 2015 06:47 PM
Thank you all  IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 54717
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 25, 2015 01:22 PM
Loves it!IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 944
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Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 25, 2015 11:25 PM
Glad you liked it  IP: Logged |
Faith
Knowflake Posts: 11500
From: Bella's Hair Salon
Registered: Jul 2011
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posted June 27, 2015 01:30 PM
Excellent  Thanks for posting.IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted June 27, 2015 08:14 PM
Thanks for commenting IP: Logged |
Randall
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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 08, 2015 01:48 PM
Very moving. Even more the second time reading it.IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 3801
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted July 08, 2015 06:30 PM
You may have tweaked it a bit? .... So Beautiful! You do nice work... (music) If I Could Reach You (Fifth Dimension) [3:04] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBiVWAAn6OU IP: Logged |
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