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Topic: Portal of Green
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 944 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 14, 2015 09:59 PM
Portal of GreenIt has been a while Time is on my side, lying to me again with its toxic fruits which turns us into dying super-human Why is the gate so close, yet closed? Is that the significance of hell? The hell it is lying beside me with its wild wild scent Natural perfume go places while I am here, singing a green green song to the desert and open my sleepy eyes Free green for everyone, on sale only today IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 54717 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 15, 2015 02:46 PM
Only today.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3802 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted June 15, 2015 06:46 PM
Ayelet!!! I spent an entire hour going over, and over, and over your poem around 1am this morning. I left to let it percolate overnight.Oh! ~~ what you DO to me? I didn't know if you meant your poem in the context of a sad way, or is it a 'wild-scent' sexy kind of way? .... Which one does it BE? This was the song I was going to choose... Your Portal Green place in the Land of Delights. Be Healed, Be soothed. It's oasis for the deserts of your life and memories-past. (music) Shangri La (Jackie Gleason & His Orchestra (instrumental) ) [3:31] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0Y7mUiwBk0 IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 58 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted June 16, 2015 01:01 PM
Wild and vivid words, amazing.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1005 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted June 16, 2015 01:18 PM
Dusky and sensual. Enjoyed the varied contrasts found within this. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 944 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 16, 2015 01:26 PM
Thank you for your comments!Mirage, it can be interpreted either way, though I don't think it is such a sad poem. It is searching, and I write things as they are. I didn't succeed to hear the song... ): Thank you, Mirage, for giving it so much of your time! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 54717 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 18, 2015 02:18 PM
It seemed a little sad to me.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 944 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 18, 2015 05:18 PM
Could be. I won't argue.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3802 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted June 18, 2015 11:03 PM
{{ }}(music) Where is Love / As Long As He Needs Me (Lea Salonga) [6:19] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZWPsamomgpw IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 54717 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 19, 2015 01:18 PM
Nah, you wrote it, so you know best.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 944 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 19, 2015 02:04 PM
Thank you Mirage, what a beautiful song, very emotional, and the singer has a great voice.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 944 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 19, 2015 02:07 PM
quote: Originally posted by Randall: Nah, you wrote it, so you know best.
I write about a gate that is close to me, yet is closed. And I put hell inside the pot. So yea, you could see sadness in it. I am merely reflecting my search. It may be sad, or fact. IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 11502 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted June 19, 2015 05:53 PM
Love this.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3802 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted June 19, 2015 05:56 PM
{{ }} I fervently wish that for you, Ayelet!... May your visions come down and manifest themselves for you in Real and earthen-form. I remember how important and Holy you said that the realm of Friendships are to you. You deserve to Find what you search and long for in your inner-most being--- /e {shortened a long description} I had had a dream-ecstasy experience once [e.o.'79/80] that involved entering a metal decorative Gate. /e [You mentioned the 'gateway' in your poem. My dream here was a 'gate' where I entered and found that Love is the glue that holds each molecule together.] Shades of Hurting Hells expressed in song for you... (music) It Hurts Like Hell (Aretha Franklin) [4:18] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bF5G2zmjQjY [/e Weather storm I stopped for (before proofreading and editing this post) was quite strong... A community just north of us sustained a lot of damage to trees, and some power outtages. e/6-23] IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 944 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 20, 2015 12:53 PM
Thank you Faith and Mirage Mirage, your experience sounds very special. I wish for you too to find your happiness, if you haven't found it yet! I have wishes which I can't have, but it doesn't mean I won't find my way eventually. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 54717 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 21, 2015 12:24 PM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Thank you Faith and Mirage Mirage, your experience sounds very special. I wish for you too to find your happiness, if you haven't found it yet! I have wishes which I can't have, but it doesn't mean I won't find my way eventually.
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3802 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted June 23, 2015 04:59 AM
Thanks Ayelet I understand your gloom, and stasis. I can relate. That was a special dream I had, but came during a period of time when I needed to believe that the world and the people in it weren't as 'ugly' as they appeared to be. I was moving through a period of cruel betrayals (I wasn't fully aware was happening, but soon would be.) God sorts things and people out.... He does. Keep Believing Things Are Possible, Ayelet... (or gosh, we may both get depressed here again!! oh nooooooo.) ... (music) Keeping The Faith (Billy Joel) [5:54] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ph7oZnBH05s IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 944 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 23, 2015 05:46 PM
Hello Mirage ...There is one wish I can never have. Besides that, many things are possible... Take care and never be gloomy IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3802 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted July 08, 2015 06:45 PM
(music) You're My Satellite (Martian Child dance) [2:00] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rCKDXlB60LE IP: Logged |