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LF DX
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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted June 26, 2015 03:25 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I’ve seen her in my dreams and nightmares
Reality has taken quite a turn
I’ve been blessed and cursed to love her
Well I hope not to get burned
Cause her fire burns stronger than the flames of the sun

“Don’t fear your heartbeats” said the czar’s daughter
“Don’t fear to rebel and go towards me”
“I fear your father’s wrath” said the brave soldier
“I love deeply but I made a pact”
To not be tempted by your angel’s eyes

I fought for my country and I’m blessed by the king
But the glory is nothing without you my dear
I dread the golden seats and your wealth
But my heart belongs to you, but I feel is wrong
You are from the noble and feel cannot be yours

“I’ll forget where I belong” she said to me
“We’ll part to the west to wherever we can go”
“Don’t go wrong for me” I said to my love
“You are dear to the people as you are to me”
Just keep your heart to them as you always do

I wish to not have this clothes
And I wish you’d not have the crown
To be just like the rest in this vast land
And love each other without this chimes
Of nobility and poverty that torn us apart

“You shall must part then” she speaks to me
“But I’ll be always for you in your heart”
“My heart is yours forever” I said to her
“And my love will always be true”
Time won’t fade it nor death it will

I’m now in a place like Dante’s hell
I’ll go forward and I’ll make it well
I withstand to die here, no I won’t
Until I reach her in the skies
To reach her in the temple of the sky

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Pearlty
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posted June 27, 2015 11:38 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

I know you normally write more lyrically.. Is this a snippet from an ongoing story? More more! Enjoyed reading.

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Ayelet
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posted June 28, 2015 01:51 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Yes, it is like a story... a ballad. Pretty. He reaches her only after death, in the sky...

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LF DX
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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted June 28, 2015 07:47 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.

Cheers

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thequeen
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Registered: Sep 2014

posted July 03, 2015 06:21 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by LF DX:
Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.

Cheers


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mirage29
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Registered: May 2012

posted July 03, 2015 06:24 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by LF DX:
Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.
Cheers

Oh that's so cool, DX! I'm glad for you!

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Randall
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posted July 04, 2015 09:07 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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