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Topic: The Soldier and the Czar's Daugher
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 55 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted June 26, 2015 03:25 PM
I’ve seen her in my dreams and nightmares Reality has taken quite a turn I’ve been blessed and cursed to love her Well I hope not to get burned Cause her fire burns stronger than the flames of the sun“Don’t fear your heartbeats” said the czar’s daughter “Don’t fear to rebel and go towards me” “I fear your father’s wrath” said the brave soldier “I love deeply but I made a pact” To not be tempted by your angel’s eyes I fought for my country and I’m blessed by the king But the glory is nothing without you my dear I dread the golden seats and your wealth But my heart belongs to you, but I feel is wrong You are from the noble and feel cannot be yours “I’ll forget where I belong” she said to me “We’ll part to the west to wherever we can go” “Don’t go wrong for me” I said to my love “You are dear to the people as you are to me” Just keep your heart to them as you always do I wish to not have this clothes And I wish you’d not have the crown To be just like the rest in this vast land And love each other without this chimes Of nobility and poverty that torn us apart “You shall must part then” she speaks to me “But I’ll be always for you in your heart” “My heart is yours forever” I said to her “And my love will always be true” Time won’t fade it nor death it will I’m now in a place like Dante’s hell I’ll go forward and I’ll make it well I withstand to die here, no I won’t Until I reach her in the skies To reach her in the temple of the sky
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1003 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted June 27, 2015 11:38 AM
I know you normally write more lyrically.. Is this a snippet from an ongoing story? More more! Enjoyed reading. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 938 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 28, 2015 01:51 PM
Yes, it is like a story... a ballad. Pretty. He reaches her only after death, in the sky... IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 55 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted June 28, 2015 07:47 PM
Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.Cheers IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 1226 From: Al Da Beatz Registered: Sep 2014
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posted July 03, 2015 06:21 AM
quote: Originally posted by LF DX: Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.Cheers
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3784 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted July 03, 2015 06:24 PM
quote: Originally posted by LF DX: Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time. Cheers
Oh that's so cool, DX! I'm glad for you! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 54570 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 04, 2015 09:07 AM
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