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LF DX
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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted August 05, 2015 01:23 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I’ve been out for some walkin’
Damn, it’s hot here in the city
It’s just September and it quite a pity
The heatwave has just begun

Lots of troubles here in the city
Everybody has too much to say
Money, food, water and trash
Sometimes it’s painful and sometimes it’s like a rash

Well I can tell what our problem is
But you have to speak it too
Silence have been the ruler for too many years
Somebody must speak what we have to do

A fellow's now tweeting
Their latest piece of thought
If we were bold and tried to fight
So many things could have been done

What’s hope for you mama
It’s a feeling or it’s a choice?
Can be touched or can be spoken?
Well hope is there for us to share

Well I believe in change baby
And in a better future, maybe
But no one can make it alone
Let’s work together and make freedoms songs, yeah

Oh, heart problems, well I can’t help it
I have em every time since I was born
The frailty and vulnerability to express it
Well mama, I just fear to be scorned

Well, another politician speaks
And the media made him a name
He’s laughing at you while he makes his crime
He knows he won the martial game

And I’m getting weaker baby
As the spring days goes by
All these problems will kill me
And if they don’t, your weariness will

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mirage29
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posted August 05, 2015 02:25 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Very picturesque!

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Ayelet
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posted August 05, 2015 10:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Cool. It sounds like a song. Do you play guitar?

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LF DX
Knowflake

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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted August 05, 2015 11:15 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Play the bass, guitar, harmonica and some drums.

I make songs but right now they don't come out easily to me, I write to keep myself on check.

Cheers.

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Randall
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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
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posted August 06, 2015 10:31 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Ayelet
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posted August 06, 2015 12:03 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You can become a band! Do you like folk? I can hear musically your poem.

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LF DX
Knowflake

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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted August 06, 2015 11:10 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Basically the music of Bob Dylan changed my life completely, it was thanks to him that I started to play the guitar and sing, and all the things that I post here is thanks to his music and lyrics. One of my major goals is to be able to write like he does. It will never be completely like that because no one in this world can write like him, but in the way of writing better to reach that level, even if english isn't my first language and I don't read that much.

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Pearlty
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posted August 07, 2015 01:32 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

I use to like Dylan a lot too!
Enjoyed your lyrics/writing.

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