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Topic: Rambling Words
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 64 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 05, 2015 01:23 PM
I’ve been out for some walkin’ Damn, it’s hot here in the city It’s just September and it quite a pity The heatwave has just begunLots of troubles here in the city Everybody has too much to say Money, food, water and trash Sometimes it’s painful and sometimes it’s like a rash Well I can tell what our problem is But you have to speak it too Silence have been the ruler for too many years Somebody must speak what we have to do A fellow's now tweeting Their latest piece of thought If we were bold and tried to fight So many things could have been done What’s hope for you mama It’s a feeling or it’s a choice? Can be touched or can be spoken? Well hope is there for us to share Well I believe in change baby And in a better future, maybe But no one can make it alone Let’s work together and make freedoms songs, yeah Oh, heart problems, well I can’t help it I have em every time since I was born The frailty and vulnerability to express it Well mama, I just fear to be scorned Well, another politician speaks And the media made him a name He’s laughing at you while he makes his crime He knows he won the martial game And I’m getting weaker baby As the spring days goes by All these problems will kill me And if they don’t, your weariness will
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3896 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 05, 2015 02:25 PM
Very picturesque! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 982 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 05, 2015 10:40 PM
Cool. It sounds like a song. Do you play guitar?IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 64 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 05, 2015 11:15 PM
Play the bass, guitar, harmonica and some drums.I make songs but right now they don't come out easily to me, I write to keep myself on check. Cheers. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 55696 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 06, 2015 10:31 AM
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 982 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 06, 2015 12:03 PM
You can become a band! Do you like folk? I can hear musically your poem.IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 64 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 06, 2015 11:10 PM
Basically the music of Bob Dylan changed my life completely, it was thanks to him that I started to play the guitar and sing, and all the things that I post here is thanks to his music and lyrics. One of my major goals is to be able to write like he does. It will never be completely like that because no one in this world can write like him, but in the way of writing better to reach that level, even if english isn't my first language and I don't read that much.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1035 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted August 07, 2015 01:32 PM
I use to like Dylan a lot too! Enjoyed your lyrics/writing. IP: Logged |