Posts: 1352
From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted August 10, 2015 04:12 AM            

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Twixt the bowers, I sit and weep,
My eyes get dry, I fall asleep,
In my dreams, you run and come,
And wake me up, I see no one,
I jump from bowers, and my eyes play,
Searching your foot, your tender neigh,
In trees I lurk, with bolts I fly,
Above the tree, in vain I sigh,
How I beheld you, when you were not around,
And enraptured I heard, your holy sound,
In hide and seek, you transform colours,
In air you float, like fish in rivers,
Feeling so delighted, you capture the breeze,
And fly so delicately, with a bunch of bees,
Attending the birds, in nest you move,
Plucking some grapes, in enchanted grooves,
Your mild footsteps, on air float,
You glide on air, nimble as goat,
To see the stars, as they own your breed,
And sniffing the rain, as your eternal need,
I hunt from behind, but swiftly you flee,
I love this game, of you and me,
So lets chase this, eternal try,
You love me, as forever will I.

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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted August 10, 2015 01:27 PM            

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Very enchanted feeling and touching.

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Registered: Sep 2010

posted August 10, 2015 06:59 PM            

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Dreamy, floating in the air, catches a feeling both faithful and whimsical.

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From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted August 14, 2015 07:27 PM            

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I could see like a unicorn, or a little cupid or fairy... so engaging! Had more flavors than some of the other poems you've written. I like this one very much!

Immediately reminded me of this song... but I wouldn't expect you to recognize this one! LOL

(music) Hark, The Echoing Air! (Purcell, Sally Sanford, soprano) [2:07] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OTHj25o3ZQE

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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009

posted August 16, 2015 12:01 PM            

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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009

posted August 17, 2015 11:14 AM            

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Never heard that one.

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