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Topic: Rambling Words N°3
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 71 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 17, 2015 04:42 PM
This is what happens when you're pretty much in love, yet you hide it pretty badly, yet you want to express it badly, didn't deliver the song, but have a great time, and my senses tell me it's mutual... Slowly I’m seeing the colors Of everything around me Springtime is coming And a little dose of happiness does wonders To a loner soul like mine I should forget about a lot of things And take a look what’s up on the hills There’s a lot of things blossoming I feel like I want to go there A place to daydream for a while Well I’m up on the hillside I pick up a flower near the river Such beauty we must take care of it To our children that hasn’t been born yet And to the ones that are waking up soon And I see the flower, a newborn rose Thinking to give it to someone I care A little gift that’s says something Some people have forgot to do it Buried in texts and codes that don’t really reach your soul I hold it softly, that precious gift Her warmness makes me dream And her spirit makes me yearn Some days I fear that feeling That I sense is too much to be received Then I look up the wonders A place that’s still untouched Clean, treasured and well protected As how we are deep inside If not for of the filth our sins had done I’m not well spoken to say it But how far we went these years Of destroying this paradise Without remorse or some kind of reflection And leaving nothing but dust and ashes on the sky I went back home, the place I belong A city in ruins, proud to be in ruins Proud to be lost in a long forgotten time Where a false sense of safety covered it As the seeds of ignorance were given and eaten As the days goes by, I kept the flower Still alive, still living peacefully And I wait for the day to give it Where its magic fully blossoms And the message will tell it all And tomorrow will be the day Where this grown up rose will be given To the one that’s worth waiting But her waiting ends someday soon Before it withers, before it dies in my hands For her I do this wondering And the daydreams and the travelling Why I say this much for that feeling When it’s all in these eyes that glance To her, that all these words are real
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 56458 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 18, 2015 09:43 AM
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3999 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 18, 2015 02:19 PM
DX!! Your work (for me) is getting more and more profound... I can apply this to so many levels, not just personal romantic but it speaks to a spiritual level, too, for me. That's good work.Quote LF DX "Rambling Words No3" Aug 17, 2015 LLYW excerpt... And I see the flower, a newborn rose Thinking to give it to someone I care A little gift that’s says something Some people have forgot to do it Buried in texts and codes that don’t really reach your soul You've reached my soul today! (music) Go Lovely Rose (Eric Whitacre, lyrics) [4:28] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7nf1agjkBU IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1025 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 18, 2015 11:33 PM
LF DX, that is a wonderful poem about life, love, the treasures in each and the wish to heal the world. Very idealistic!IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 71 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 19, 2015 12:44 AM
Thank you very much, this is all thanks to keep writing through the years, always trying to improve till I know I can't top myself, I love writing, and it's the only way I can put my emotional wanderings the way I want to.And it's all thanks to the lady I'm writing all these past poems, being a musician, painter and an activist did quite a number to me, as well knowing her background, pretty stable unlike me which was dysfunctional, and her gentle personality and beauty, all combined. The only reason I didn't act on these feelings is because I still have some wounds I didn't heal completely, And I have a deep problem expressing love, but I can't help to convey this kind of things in this way. And I know I can't just let things pass, I want to face this issue. The only thing I know now this woman is the kind that will leave a mark. Cheers IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1025 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 19, 2015 01:54 AM
I hope you find the calm to confide in her, whatever may happen. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3999 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 19, 2015 10:50 AM
I weep as I read your reply to Ayelet, DX.Sometimes love can be THE catalyst, that brings us to the altar of our ultimate purpose. All the wild strands of our life, collect and are braided into a core, a conduit for all that can make us feel truly virtuous and Alive... There is a huge difference in you DX, from your first postings here. I am awed and so grateful to be a witness to these happenings in you. Soooo glad for you, soooo glad. Your work is deep, top-notch! How can she not resist you? Go for your Highest Expression. How could she not be touched by your authenticity? Finding love can tap, organize, and ground us. ... Maybe her stability needs some of your creative instability (if you want to call it that) in order for her to express and find her own purpose. Making all the Difference... Pursue and Treasure Love wherever and while she may be found. (music) Strange Desire (Nicci Gable) [8:19] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Z9pYnodRPQ IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1068 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted August 21, 2015 08:14 AM
Beautiful wordy illustrations of your feelings. IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 71 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 28, 2015 12:35 PM
quote: Originally posted by mirage29: your creative instability
That's probably one of the most accurate descriptions of my life I have seen, hahaha. I think that sometimes I create all the drama and fears for the sake of creating, I need that unstability to keep on making art, although this year I finally started to depart from that way of doing things. Things are good, but slow, got her number and I plan to invite her to the recording session for my band's EP. I know that I have attract her thanks to my art, and I sense that attraction when we're close, but I can't pull out of my shelter yet. Having a moon (aquarius) squaring the sun, mars and pluto(scorpio), and the life experiences are making it very hard. But I know if I open myself to her and break the ice, good things will happen. Cheers. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3999 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 28, 2015 03:38 PM
(Really hope all goes well...)IP: Logged | |