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posted September 02, 2015 01:44 PM            

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Informality

Hardly have I seen
a mirage so enchanting
I could not stay a minute
without saying "Goodbye"
So good and so relentless
was this sight to my sight
Why have I been so careless
to drop the bread, thy flesh,
cast down the wine, thy blood
Will you see me, back and again
surrounded by the shadows of what has passed?
It seems like I am melting,
yet try to figure out why,
and in all wandering
I barely know
the angel who survives.

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posted September 02, 2015 06:13 PM            

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Beautiful.... Well Ayelet, being a mirage here *ahem*, and inclusive with all who partake here together, we share and have communion of our Hearts, through our arts. We share our deepest souls-- after the merging, then the ripping, comes the mending. Scars are evidence we have all joined the survivors' Humanity club. Just that sometimes, people can suffer from adhesions... But it is possible to heal.

And in the mean-while, the beating of the Heart happened, and another breath just took place.

Living out one-moment-at-a-time. Only one. Just one. Then again...

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posted September 03, 2015 12:53 AM            

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What a great way to say "I'm moving foward, slowly".

Great poem.

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posted September 03, 2015 11:52 AM            

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I heard like an echo in this, a reverberation back to yourself, solidifying your decisions and thoughts.

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posted September 03, 2015 11:59 AM            

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Btw.. Mirage your reply- just beautiful, had to say so.

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posted September 03, 2015 03:58 PM            

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{{ thanks Pearlty}}

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posted September 03, 2015 08:48 PM            

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Thank you Mirage, LF DX and Pearlty!

Mirage - Yes, you are indeed an enchanting mirage
I wonder what adhesions you are writing about. Can you explain?

Yes, DX, I guess that's what I'm doing.

Pearlty, I am rolling the subject between me
and I, so I can see the reverberation here.

Very late. Time sleep-lop.

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posted September 04, 2015 12:53 PM            

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Originally posted by Pearlty:

Btw.. Mirage your reply- just beautiful, had to say so.

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