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Topic: Dance of a Sleeping Bee
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1269 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 06, 2016 11:47 PM
Dance of a Sleeping BeeForgotten melodies haunt me tonight I am looking inside for a remedy, put on my skirt and watch these legs, this dance all over people's heads, Nocking where they keep forgetting, and they never seem to notice, not even the man I love. He should have known I am not dead, gone away completely with this night. Life has made my man a busy bee, Necessity his queen, quenching his thirst his salvation. He still cannot see beyond the rays of day, where I am still present, an ethereal flower,only now begins to open, trying too become less transparent. After all, he falls asleep and dance, and dance with me for keeps. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4742 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 07, 2016 12:05 AM
Sooo Beautiful...Read it over and over and over again. from Ayelet's work, Dance of a Sleeping Bee He still cannot see beyond the rays of day, where I am still present, an ethereal flower, only now begins to open, trying to become less transparent. After all, he falls asleep and dance, and dance with me for keeps Tapestry... IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1240 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted January 07, 2016 08:09 AM
A perfect escape toward recollection (Forgotten melodies) IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 172 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 07, 2016 08:11 PM
Amazing poem, very powerful.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1269 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 08, 2016 10:37 AM
Thank you Mirage, Pearlty and LF DX! IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2276 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 09, 2016 12:46 PM
That's the story of men and women nowadays. So busy in trying to catch up, that forget the basic necessities and relationships. On the remnant time, only good enough to shed the physique. Very well composed. IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 15141 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted January 10, 2016 05:01 PM
Exquisite...IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1269 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 10, 2016 07:47 PM
That is true sometimes, thequeen, but I hope it's not that common.Thank you and Faith for reading IP: Logged |
Swift Freeze Moderator Posts: 721 From: Dreams Registered: Nov 2009
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posted January 17, 2016 06:10 PM
Loved it.------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1269 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 18, 2016 08:28 PM
Thank you Swift Freeze IP: Logged |