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Ayelet
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posted January 06, 2016 11:47 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Dance of a Sleeping Bee

Forgotten melodies haunt me tonight
I am looking inside for a remedy,
put on my skirt and watch
these legs, this dance
all over people's heads,
Nocking where they keep forgetting,
and they never seem to notice,
not even the man I love.
He should have known I am not dead,
gone away completely with this night.
Life has made my man a busy bee,
Necessity his queen,
quenching his thirst his salvation.
He still cannot see beyond the rays of day,
where I am still present,
an ethereal flower,only now begins to open,
trying too become less transparent.
After all, he falls asleep
and dance, and dance with me for keeps.

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mirage29
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posted January 07, 2016 12:05 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Sooo Beautiful...Read it over and over and over again.

from Ayelet's work, Dance of a Sleeping Bee
He still cannot see beyond the rays of day,
where I am still present,
an ethereal flower, only now begins to open,
trying to become less transparent.
After all, he falls asleep
and dance, and dance with me for keeps

Tapestry...

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Pearlty
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posted January 07, 2016 08:09 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

A perfect escape toward recollection (Forgotten melodies)

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LF DX
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posted January 07, 2016 08:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Amazing poem, very powerful.

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Ayelet
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posted January 08, 2016 10:37 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you Mirage, Pearlty and LF DX!

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thequeen
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posted January 09, 2016 12:46 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
That's the story of men and women nowadays. So busy in trying to catch up, that forget the basic necessities and relationships. On the remnant time, only good enough to shed the physique. Very well composed.

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Faith
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posted January 10, 2016 05:01 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Exquisite...

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Ayelet
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posted January 10, 2016 07:47 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
That is true sometimes, thequeen, but I hope it's not that common.

Thank you and Faith for reading

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Swift Freeze
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posted January 17, 2016 06:10 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Loved it.

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Ayelet
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posted January 18, 2016 08:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you Swift Freeze

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