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Topic: Waking from life
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whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 2998
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 12, 2016 11:33 AM
  
I have been called a saint,
One too beautiful to cry,
Yet for this,
All I wish is to die,
Show me no more your pains,
The sins I cannot commend,
Your sins are my end,
Life;
All a dream until death,
I'm ready to wake up to take breath,
Yet peaceful must I go,
Go in my sleep
God grant me a pleasant dream
Before I wake up
To a world without screams IP: Logged |
whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 2998
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 12, 2016 11:34 AM
Written to "a dream on the way to death" from the crow 2 IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 4689
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted January 12, 2016 04:04 PM
Whitewitch!!! .....  Are you okay??IP: Logged |
thequeen
Knowflake Posts: 2249
From: India
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 12, 2016 05:04 PM
Very highly written. A beautiful verse. How all of us are but human while pretending to be saint, who are yet again human. Very penetrating and showing you the mirror sort of poem.IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 1263
From:
Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 12, 2016 06:46 PM
I wish the dream you asked for would be so good, you won't even need to wake up. In a way, you'll be waking up while still dreaming. Penetrating.
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whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 2998
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 13, 2016 12:48 AM
quote:
Originally posted by thequeen:
Very highly written. A beautiful verse. How all of us are but human while pretending to be saint, who are yet again human. Very penetrating and showing you the mirror sort of poem.
I appreciate your words,  writing is the only thing I'm really good at...of course certain peoples have not the bronze to read it.
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