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roseelima16
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posted March 08, 2016 12:00 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for roseelima16     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I've been writing poems since I was 15 yrs old. Most people that know me have no clue about my hobby. I still have an old blog but haven't posted much lately. That's one of the last I wrote...

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The Wind

A strong warm wind has taken all of me
My body, heart and mind, even my soul
It turned me inside out so suddenly
From North to South I just can't have control

It blew stardust around, I hardly see
I'm blind and all I know is what I sense
Along my skin I feel it burning me
No escape for me: the heat's too intense

A tender kiss is stolen from my lips
I try to touch it in vain but I can't reach
My eyes and mouth are sealed, I have no speech

When Sun and Moon are one in total eclipse
I hear your voice, sweet whisper in my ear
I wish that strong warm wind was you, my dear

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Randall
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posted March 09, 2016 10:33 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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roseelima16
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posted March 10, 2016 01:28 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for roseelima16     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Pearlty
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posted March 10, 2016 09:56 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

This is beautiful roseelima16.

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roseelima16
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posted March 10, 2016 03:56 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for roseelima16     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Originally posted by Pearlty:

This is beautiful roseelima16.

Oh, thank you Pearlty! I wrote it to my hub!

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Ayelet
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posted March 12, 2016 12:08 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I rather thought the warm wind was him. Full of charm.

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mirage29
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posted March 12, 2016 02:35 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Far away memories of what is always Near, but we don't always have the presence of mind and Mind to acknowledge.

Really magical, Roseelima! ... Divine

So, this New Moon Total Pisces Eclipse has resurrected, reminded, and revealed something Best and Deep you've had hidden in the Treasure inside you. (And appreciation for what is daily beside you, since it's your husband! ...)

Thanks for sharing!

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