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Topic: The Wind
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roseelima16 Knowflake Posts: 181 From: Registered: Sep 2015
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posted March 08, 2016 12:00 AM
I've been writing poems since I was 15 yrs old. Most people that know me have no clue about my hobby. I still have an old blog but haven't posted much lately. That's one of the last I wrote...********** The Wind A strong warm wind has taken all of me My body, heart and mind, even my soul It turned me inside out so suddenly From North to South I just can't have control It blew stardust around, I hardly see I'm blind and all I know is what I sense Along my skin I feel it burning me No escape for me: the heat's too intense A tender kiss is stolen from my lips I try to touch it in vain but I can't reach My eyes and mouth are sealed, I have no speech When Sun and Moon are one in total eclipse I hear your voice, sweet whisper in my ear I wish that strong warm wind was you, my dear ********* IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 63077 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 09, 2016 10:33 AM
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roseelima16 Knowflake Posts: 181 From: Registered: Sep 2015
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posted March 10, 2016 01:28 AM
quote: Originally posted by Randall:
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1298 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted March 10, 2016 09:56 AM
This is beautiful roseelima16. IP: Logged |
roseelima16 Knowflake Posts: 181 From: Registered: Sep 2015
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posted March 10, 2016 03:56 PM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty:
This is beautiful roseelima16.
Oh, thank you Pearlty! I wrote it to my hub! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1321 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted March 12, 2016 12:08 PM
I rather thought the warm wind was him. Full of charm.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 5050 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted March 12, 2016 02:35 PM
Far away memories of what is always Near, but we don't always have the presence of mind and Mind to acknowledge.Really magical, Roseelima! ... Divine So, this New Moon Total Pisces Eclipse has resurrected, reminded, and revealed something Best and Deep you've had hidden in the Treasure inside you. (And appreciation for what is daily beside you, since it's your husband! ...) Thanks for sharing! IP: Logged |