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Topic: Poem 5
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LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 228
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted March 17, 2016 12:15 PM
  
Some people said it’s hard
When you live different lives
Well I hope those aren’t the words
You might say
No I ain’t a man of the people
But I’m getting there
I only hope that you can hear
What I have to sayLiving and constantly fighting
Doesn’t do any kind of good
Codes are broken and the faith forsaken
I wonder what we did wrong
The whole mankind is staging
Their own demise
Where are the righteous, or the wise?
They are the fools who make the rules Been on the bottoms
I’ve seen the fury of the poor
And the tears of the children
Who can’t take it no more
And the fathers have to steal
And the mothers have to pay
And the brothers make deals
To sell their souls to get high You may say to me
Why you hide yourself
Not everyone can lead the way
I just don’t have the degree
I’m content to write from the distance
As long as I can see
The sins and the miracles
From this world full of twists We’re humans, meant to fail
To starve and go down
And to watch the lights of the dawn
To get back on the road again
And peace may come to us
And love may come to us
And every soul will be opened
And no more prayers will be send So if you fear my restlessness
Don’t be, I’m not that bad
I’m just like you woman
Searching for a gem
In a soul that starts to breathe
And a mind that wants to seek
Through death and rebirth
In this world so narrow and bleak And I just want to learn
To see the light like you do
And I won’t do you any harm
I hope we can make it through
As I felt your soft touch
When we held our hands
Swinging on a midnight dance
Every word from there on is for you
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Randall
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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 18, 2016 11:28 AM
I love this.IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 1349
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posted March 19, 2016 08:04 AM
Harsh and romantic... interesting comboIP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 5128
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted March 20, 2016 07:31 PM
I see a lot of Good here.... She's from 'the other side of the tracks'... She has education and certificates, family and wealth. Your Wealth is IN you. You are full of Worth, and talent, ready to be with someone your Equal in life.... Someone who loves music, and has a bent towards wanting to solve the hurts and social inequalities of life. You've Lived it.... Stand Strong. You've Got It.    (music) You Don't Have To Be A Star {To Be In My Show} (Marilyn McCoo, Billy Davis, Jr.) [3:41] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmVxZaXTMNI IP: Logged |
LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 228
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted March 20, 2016 10:30 PM
She has those things, but this writing was more from the point of she's a little reckless on her activism, she's been very active in her medical school as her university is one of the most corrupt in our country, and she's been starting to get more involved in student councils and all of that stuff. What I write is my feeling of not being more upfront with what's happening around, sometimes I'd wish to be more forward instead of being in the shadows, and try to be with here more in her activities, but trying to create a relationship with a student of medicine has a lot of difficulties... but I'm going to make it IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 5128
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Registered: May 2012
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posted March 21, 2016 02:34 PM
It's good that you are there for her, watching and supporting-- even if you feel it's more 'background'. That counts too. Trust your instincts. Is the medical student interested in social-issues, and the Cancer Woman in the band that you are in-love with, the same person, or are we talking about two different entities here? IP: Logged |
LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 228
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted March 21, 2016 04:26 PM
It's another woman, the cancer woman and I remained friends, and our band is back on track, Her BF is far more impressive than I thought now that I hanged more with them, and he's a great fit for our band, it is what is, but at least, the music's shining.The medical student is a Sagi with lots of capricorn planets, we had some great times lately, but her lack of proper time to hang out, and that we're both shy to get closer, and that both just got out of romantic hardships, her with a LTR of 6 years and I of what you already know, there's a good connection forming, but lots of difficulties. It was by playing music once again, and through this Sagi woman that my spirit got up again. IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 5128
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted March 21, 2016 09:06 PM
Thanks. Good to hear that things evolved to a good place with the musicians.With the Sagi in medical school? hmmmmm. That IS a more than full-time demand for her. The side sex might be nice, but you might have to book that at least a month in advance? LOL Yes, music is medicinal. Has accompanied and comforted me through many funks. Processes things faster-- like on multiple layers at a time. Thanks again for the news, and your writings. IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 63472
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 23, 2016 02:59 PM
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Pearlty
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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted March 24, 2016 10:28 AM
Lovely dedication. IP: Logged |
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