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LF DX
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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted March 30, 2016 03:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
There’re ashes and blood
O’er this lowdown and forsaken town
Yet it breathes and howls
For the buried in the ground
For the trains and dead railroads
For the lonely souls like mine

I walk and talk to the ghosts
They pat me on the back
And said to place all my bets
On the Russian roulette
I said I’ll bet for the 88
Maybe then they’ll cut me some slack

And the river, giver of life
Giver of the name of the land
Dirty like the bloody oil
Dead as a graveyard
Has no spark, no soul
And I wonder, if there’s still some kind of life

Lost, lost in many thoughts
Of the things I never sought
For the precious things
For the many longings
And the many questions
On what’s right or what’s wrong

Yet they speak of the past
The old glorious past
Where you had no voice
No pleasure or choice
Where the prose was forbidden
And the wisdom was eaten

By me, or you, or someone
Who lives in this present time
Of carelessness, of raggedness
Of forgetting and regretting
That we’re different, and so distant
Yet still, we’re the same

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Ayelet
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posted March 30, 2016 04:33 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You have uttered some powerful (talking about powerful ) thoughts along those lines, about the meaning of life and death, and the effect of time. It seems yours is a restless spirit, seeking to find truth and meaning in life's storms, that sometimes resemble too much the silence of the graveyard with their ruthlessness.

What's the meaning of the 88? Please do tell!

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Pearlty
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posted March 31, 2016 01:00 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Haunting realizations, you penned this exquisitely.

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mirage29
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posted March 31, 2016 06:12 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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