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thequeen
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From: India
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posted May 14, 2016 08:03 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
In the midst of chaos, I unzip me free,
Holding my insanity, Brimming out of me,
Oranges in backyard, Bitter and sweet,
Tasting your love, raising sun's heat,
In and out, Charisma oh charm,
I subdue the passion, chasing the alarm,
Crest of mountain, like my face's curves,
You push me further, electrifying my nerves,
But you and me, But us in lane,
Likes vineyards of fashion, moulding insane,
Aura of divinity, drunk and snuck,
You plunder my name, me left awestruck,
Distant and due, my pining ribs,
Holding but you, in frozen apocalypse

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Pearlty
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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted May 14, 2016 12:17 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Encased with imagery, vision and very sensual. Love this thequeen.

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Ayelet
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posted May 14, 2016 05:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Rich and beautiful rap.

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mirage29
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posted May 16, 2016 11:35 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Revelry and Ecstasy! You evoke many senses, TQ. ... Wonderful!

Apocalypse? ... time for the Last Dance! What a Party!!!

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thequeen
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From: India
Registered: Sep 2014

posted May 18, 2016 01:51 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you Pearlty, I was wishing that I evoke these feelings through this piece.

Thanks Ayelet, I am glad you find Rap in my poems

Thanks Mirage, you explained it so fully

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