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Topic: Apocalypse
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2430 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted May 14, 2016 08:03 AM
In the midst of chaos, I unzip me free, Holding my insanity, Brimming out of me, Oranges in backyard, Bitter and sweet, Tasting your love, raising sun's heat, In and out, Charisma oh charm, I subdue the passion, chasing the alarm, Crest of mountain, like my face's curves, You push me further, electrifying my nerves, But you and me, But us in lane, Likes vineyards of fashion, moulding insane, Aura of divinity, drunk and snuck, You plunder my name, me left awestruck, Distant and due, my pining ribs, Holding but you, in frozen apocalypseIP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1362 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted May 14, 2016 12:17 PM
Encased with imagery, vision and very sensual. Love this thequeen.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1441 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 14, 2016 05:34 PM
Rich and beautiful rap.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 5384 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted May 16, 2016 11:35 PM
Revelry and Ecstasy! You evoke many senses, TQ. ... Wonderful! Apocalypse? ... time for the Last Dance! What a Party!!! IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2430 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted May 18, 2016 01:51 PM
Thank you Pearlty, I was wishing that I evoke these feelings through this piece.Thanks Ayelet, I am glad you find Rap in my poems Thanks Mirage, you explained it so fully IP: Logged | |