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posted June 26, 2016 07:01 PM            

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Breathe
Exhale
Eyes wide open
The world keeps moving
And so do you...
Move.

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posted June 27, 2016 11:34 PM            

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... Thumbsup!

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posted June 28, 2016 02:54 PM            

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It seems like you command someone to live... You begin with an order and ends with an order, and in the middle you acknowledge that this is the way of the world, and so also one's way, anyway...

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posted June 29, 2016 11:55 AM            

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Meditative and flowing.

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posted June 29, 2016 04:38 PM            

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....also could be ~sexy??? (omg, Mars Scorpio going Direct!! haha)

This poem was really 'short' for you, LFDX!! {{ }}

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posted June 29, 2016 05:41 PM            

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Gotta try to make different things, sometimes with something short you can say a lot, and I tried to do that with this.

Aye, it's more about moving forward, when you feel stuck in your reality, everybody and everything moves still, so you, even if you fear, or feel the anxiety, you gotta move, there's no choice left... or that's what popped in my mind on this one.

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posted June 29, 2016 06:30 PM            

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I see... so you were talking to yourself... That definitely changes the reading. You are inspiring yourself, perhaps, to do something, to move, inspite of fear.

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posted June 29, 2016 07:04 PM            

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That's sooo Inspiring!!!

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