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Topic: Poem 8
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 283 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted June 27, 2016 11:58 PM
Connections, many to come and go Possessions, none of it are meaningful Expressions, they ebb and flow Emotions, they make or break The play of give and take For pride, or greed Or the sense of fear That the one in front is a foe And everyone’s a foe Always with a knife on our backs Ready for the maneuver The fatal stab, straight to our heads Or to the main artery of the heart Where it hurts the most. Yes, everyone is an enemy You are my enemy I am your betrayer Let’s kill each other now… Slowly while the world decays Between the rains of misfortune And the peaceful state of war Creation of this modern isolation And the model thought of the present “Nothing really last… Nothing… Nothing at all.”
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 5638 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted June 28, 2016 10:36 AM
Excellent, LFDX!! This is great work (inner too). IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1493 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 28, 2016 02:48 PM
Dark and cutting, like a stab in front of you, not on your back... IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1395 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted June 29, 2016 11:57 AM
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