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Topic: Intesaab (a dedication)
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venus2tinkerbell Knowflake Posts: 1978 From: the baseball hall of fame Registered: Nov 2014
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posted July 29, 2016 09:27 PM
Your silence is a gateway to worlds unknown. I sit. I am still. I run after you. The trees whisper through the window. You listen. Your silence is a reflection- Eternity.
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venus2tinkerbell Knowflake Posts: 1978 From: the baseball hall of fame Registered: Nov 2014
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posted July 29, 2016 09:30 PM
Hello greetings I love the way it feels here. I'm not sure what I'm doing IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1429 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted July 30, 2016 08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading. It's beautiful. IP: Logged |
venus2tinkerbell Knowflake Posts: 1978 From: the baseball hall of fame Registered: Nov 2014
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posted July 30, 2016 12:56 PM
Like the wind and the sea you roll in; a whirling lover, a cold philosopher, you roll out; death.I feel lashing and caressing, but you only came to witness. I still do not see the rose before my eyes. You've come and gone. And awakened me. I run after you. IP: Logged |
venus2tinkerbell Knowflake Posts: 1978 From: the baseball hall of fame Registered: Nov 2014
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posted July 30, 2016 12:57 PM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty:
I enjoyed reading. It's beautiful.
Hi Pearlty thank you.
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2692 From: The Devil Wears Prada Registered: Sep 2014
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posted July 30, 2016 02:24 PM
Beautiful .. Silences the heart.. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1629 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted July 30, 2016 03:09 PM
Few words embody deep wells.IP: Logged |
venus2tinkerbell Knowflake Posts: 1978 From: the baseball hall of fame Registered: Nov 2014
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posted July 30, 2016 08:43 PM
Under the sycamore you blow secrets. They settle beside us in the grass.If it were Not Today, I would not ask, 'Where will you Be Tomorrow'. Under the sycamore, stars scattered in the grass, gazing down on our reflection; stars scattered in the sky. If it were Not Today, I would not ask, 'With what voice? In whose clay' IP: Logged |
venus2tinkerbell Knowflake Posts: 1978 From: the baseball hall of fame Registered: Nov 2014
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posted July 30, 2016 08:45 PM
Thank you friends, thequeen 👑, and Ayelet.It is a pleasure to be here. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1629 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted July 30, 2016 09:59 PM
Great addition. Rich in euphony and meaning.IP: Logged |
Elysia Knowflake Posts: 1733 From: Gotham Registered: Aug 2015
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posted July 30, 2016 11:39 PM
It's got a lovely rolling rhythm, and so full of meaning.. ! IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2692 From: The Devil Wears Prada Registered: Sep 2014
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posted July 31, 2016 02:44 PM
very beautiful . . love the rythm of those lines IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 5830 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 01, 2016 02:25 PM
quote: Originally posted by venus2tinkerbell: Like the wind and the sea you roll in; a whirling lover, a cold philosopher, you roll out; death.I feel lashing and caressing, but you only came to witness. I still do not see the rose before my eyes. You've come and gone. And awakened me. I run after you.
That's REALLY REALLY gorgeous, V2Tinkerbell. WOW. Glad you found us~! There are few things that can Compare to a Living and Direct Experiencing of The Beloved One. He satisfies, and leaves you wanting more and more of the Depths of Him. And if you listen to this song, it's like the vortex of Soul and soul exchanging, and feeding each other. So Beautiful.... (music) Run To You (Whitney Houston, lyrics) [4:22] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=itgKAvRxmLQ IP: Logged |
venus2tinkerbell Knowflake Posts: 1978 From: the baseball hall of fame Registered: Nov 2014
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posted August 01, 2016 03:41 PM
quote: Originally posted by mirage29: (music) Run To You (Whitney Houston, lyrics) [4:22] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=itgKAvRxmLQ
Of course you get it Mirage In tears IP: Logged |
venus2tinkerbell Knowflake Posts: 1978 From: the baseball hall of fame Registered: Nov 2014
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posted August 01, 2016 03:49 PM
That song. It's amazing how someone can make something you heard a thousand times come to life.I Love your Love for music, poetry. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 5830 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 01, 2016 03:54 PM
You Are my Sister.... whom I Love {{{ }}}IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 313 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 04, 2016 02:41 PM
Powerful words, great workIP: Logged |