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Topic: My heart is sewn
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whitewitch111 Knowflake Posts: 3311 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted August 10, 2016 05:17 PM
My heart is sewn The tatters they hurt The needle and thread Puncture the veins Which squirt Scarlett red Not long now though Soon I shan't ever bleed again I am sewing up my heart Elixir of pain I've sewn up my heart My lungs are a pin cushion To put in the hell.
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2826 From: The Devil Wears Prada Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 11, 2016 05:19 AM
Wow, so poignant pouring of heart out ...IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1698 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 11, 2016 06:13 PM
Painful images, sharply and well written.IP: Logged |
whitewitch111 Knowflake Posts: 3311 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted August 11, 2016 08:14 PM
Thank you both 😊😊😊IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 68456 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 12, 2016 02:45 PM
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1440 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted August 15, 2016 08:45 AM
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