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Topic: You Must Fear No More
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1787 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted September 14, 2016 09:13 PM
You Must Fear No MoreLife is everlasting, You must fear no more, 'Cause life is so much stronger than ponderings of yore, and so must gratify at last all longings of before. I wish to give you a rose that never wilts. Plant it in your heart, water it with winter falls, then wait. You shall watch it flourish, You shall witness the miracle, Just remember "I told you so". It is not a silly matter to invest your life's treasure in a bloom nor in a smile in the rain. Don't miss the message enfolded in between the lines. She'll be waiting with open arms. IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1476 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted September 15, 2016 09:49 AM
Such a positive & touching poem, very nice IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 337 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted September 15, 2016 05:33 PM
Quite positive indeed, good one aye!!!IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2942 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted September 15, 2016 07:02 PM
you need to have quite a bit of depth to write like you live it. That is exactly what your poem did, could be deemed as a very old soul united with young soul writing ty for writing the way you do..,IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 6053 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted September 15, 2016 07:11 PM
???? I hope you allude to having located the possibility of a Possible Soulmate or True Love, Ayelet?????! How COOL!! I Hope your Heart finds Resonance with another Deeply Committed Living Heart, who is Able to Care and reciprocate all the Love you can give... May you find True Love and a Real Friendship that never wilts... (music) Go, Lovely Rose (Eric Whitacre, lyrics) [4:21] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jt-gfqUzfQw IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1787 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted September 16, 2016 07:28 AM
Thank you Pearlty and LF DX.. Thank you so much for your kind response, thequeen Mirage I wish to have a soulmate with me, but I also feel I need to develop and grow... and I allow for a blessing to happen, but it better happen in its own time. Of course I'd rather not to march alone, but what if it's necessary for the greater good? You won't hear me complaining too much. I rather live as if he was already with me than cry over an apparent absence. And I believe he is with me in spirit, and that is the most important thing. It is much better than to have someone close to you that is actually very remote and distant... a stranger in your own home.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 6053 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted September 16, 2016 02:27 PM
Quote I rather live as if he was already with me than cry over an apparent absence.Ayelet ... This morning, I reviewed a tv talk show where they were exploring dating and romantic issues, with folks trying to find love. Basically, it's better to have someone who is attracted to and loves your Soul. One man complained that the women didn't have the level of confidence and self esteem he required. The advice he received from the hosts was that perhaps that's what worth HE could bring to the table. Maybe he is the element which would provide the needed encouragement and love this person needs, which in turn would bolster her sense of confidence and esteem. Some factors you can fix just because of 'who you are' in and to that relationship. Just because a person seems flawed, doesn't mean it can't work out. We all have strengths and weaknesses, and, we fill in some of those gaps for others. You might be a missing element in this person's life, that makes good chemistry and enables them (and each other) to be their best version. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1787 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted September 16, 2016 06:36 PM
I have no match right now. I don't see people as flawed, it doesn't have to do with me being too critical. Just haven't found my soulmate.IP: Logged |