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posted September 28, 2016 10:08 AM            

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Peaceable dreams

cress and recede

over prismatic cloud bursts of red and golds

words they fall like delectable kisses

while familiar locutions

travel over again

this beautiful excess of love.

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posted September 28, 2016 06:36 PM            

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Beautiful. Etheric, pictorial, the images fall one by one in pieces to their fragmented place in this poem. This is very much a style of yours.

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posted September 29, 2016 02:23 AM            

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^ Agree!

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posted September 29, 2016 02:23 PM            

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Thank you both! Love your interp. Ayelet.

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posted November 14, 2019 04:53 PM            

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I somehow missed this.

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posted December 14, 2019 12:50 PM            

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Bump!

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posted February 22, 2020 12:13 AM            

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Beautiful ebb and flow of the poetic rhythms

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posted February 28, 2020 02:04 PM            

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Originally posted by Virgo-AriesArtist:
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Thank you Virgo-AriesArtist, I forgot about this one

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posted April 04, 2020 07:19 PM            

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Originally posted by Virgo-AriesArtist:
Beautiful ebb and flow of the poetic rhythms

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posted May 04, 2020 04:40 PM            

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I'm captivated. It captivates me.

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posted May 15, 2020 04:29 PM            

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posted September 10, 2020 10:02 AM            

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One of my favorites.

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posted June 20, 2021 05:32 PM            

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posted June 26, 2021 07:19 PM            

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Thanks for the ^ Randall, good for me to reread these poems.. Love makes for beautiful writing.

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posted July 12, 2021 01:26 PM            

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Still one of my faves.

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