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pippastrelle
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posted October 19, 2016 06:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Debris.

Peel away the layers that she built to protect,
within you'll find the child she chose to neglect :
the endless dreams she had the lightness of heart,
unaware then of a World that would rip her apart.

That girl who stopped to smell flowers and skipped everywhere,
a heart bursting with love and a need to care
never feeling the need to hide or pretend,
when exactly did carefree begin it's painful end.

Not knowing loves limits or when to say help me,
broke in so many places but too blind to see ;
taking on too much and eroding with time,
tiring of painting face for the grand pantomime.

Yet still a wry smile at how she got it so wrong,
always a second to all others song :
not near tough enough for a harsh numbing World,
like a flower perishing in cold with its petals unfurled.

Too many battles and too much pain,
what it's doing to her she can no longer feign :
salty tears that fall and trickle upon her lips,
this bittersweet elixir of Life she imbibes in sips.

She'll rest her spirit upon a bereft shore,
finding strength within for the onslaught of more
so very soul weary of Life's duress,
radiate to her your love in an open caress.

<3

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Swift Freeze
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posted October 19, 2016 06:24 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I think it's been a long time since you last shared something here.

It was wonderful to read thank you.

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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pippastrelle
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posted October 19, 2016 06:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi ,Swift Freeze, yes it has been a long time! Glad you enjoyed the read!😃

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Ayelet
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posted October 20, 2016 09:29 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Beautiful, so descriptive and full of emotion.

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pippastrelle
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posted October 20, 2016 10:51 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you, Ayelet! Glad you liked it!💟

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mirage29
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posted October 20, 2016 06:48 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Good poem describing the world and sense of a hurt innerChild.

"radiate to her your love in an open caress"

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