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Swift Freeze
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posted October 27, 2016 10:36 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
She dreams in colour

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The clock strikes two and she starts to cry,
if you don't know her then you won't know why,
would you cry if I told you the story of this girl,
where black and white were her whole world,

Alone at night as she lies on her bed,
wondering tonight if she'll get any rest,
from all the voices that are in her head,
telling her that she'll never be the best,

As you watch her drift to sleep,
you see her soul is finally at peace,
the most important thing you see is,
when she sleeps is when she dreams,


And she dreams in colour, Mmm,
oh she dreams in colour,


The orange and reds of a caring lover,

The yellows and greens of a protective brother,

The blues and violets of a world to discover,

The dusky browns of a road yet undiscovered,


As she looks up at the dark,
searching vainly for a spark,
the smallest fire to ignite her,
the hopes and dreams that dwell inside her,

The shooting stars light up the sky,
fill her heart and help her fly,
the light that bursts is filled with colour,
and now you see she's filled with wonder,

The world that once was black and white,
now has finally come to life,
the most important thing you see is,
now she dreams, she dreams she's free,


And she dreams in colour, Mmm,
oh she dreams in colour,


The orange and reds of a caring lover,

The yellows and greens of a protective brother,

The blues and violets of a world to discover,

The dusky browns of an adventure yet undiscovered,


She dreams in colour,
oh she dreams in colour, Mmm.

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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Randall
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posted October 28, 2016 11:29 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Would make a great song.

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mirage29
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posted October 28, 2016 12:12 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Swift Freeze ... I read this last night, and I was soooo moved by it that I had to let it Be and steep in me.

Just a gorgeous and extraordinary pretty piece. Thank you.


Of course, the rolodex of songs in my mind went searching.... and I can relate songs about that which pertain to ME, and not so much your poem.

Thanks again...

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mirage29
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posted October 28, 2016 12:23 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I notice you're back after an absence for a while... And, you list where you are From as 'Dreams'.

Has something happened in your life that has added Color in your Waking?

{{Laughing, I couldn't resist it!}}

Don't be afraid to let them show....
Your true colors are Beautiful,
Like a Rainbow.

(music) True Colors (Cyndi Lauper, lyrics) [4:09] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HFiz-j66X74

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Ayelet
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posted October 28, 2016 12:44 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Really beautiful and touching, the story enfolded

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Swift Freeze
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posted October 28, 2016 07:19 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by mirage29:
I notice you're back after an absence for a while... And, you list where you are From as 'Dreams'.

Has something happened in your life that has added Color in your Waking?

{{Laughing, I couldn't resist it!}}

Don't be afraid to let them show....
Your true colors are Beautiful,
Like a Rainbow.

(music) True Colors (Cyndi Lauper, lyrics) [4:09] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HFiz-j66X74


I was always more of a reader than a poster, but that's part of my personality anyway.

There is little colour in my waking at the moment, but thank you all for your kind words.

P.S I wrote it as a song, I am in the process of writing the right music to go with it.

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Ayelet
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posted October 28, 2016 09:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Could you post the song when it's done, so we can hear it?

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Swift Freeze
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posted October 29, 2016 08:37 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I do not feel comfortable doing that.

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mirage29
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posted October 29, 2016 09:04 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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pippastrelle
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posted October 29, 2016 01:41 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Absolutely beautiful lyrics, love it!💜

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Pearlty
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posted November 01, 2016 11:27 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Kaleidoscope of delicate feelings..

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thequeen
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posted November 01, 2016 12:04 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
As I started reading it, this piece immediately sung to me... beautiful insight into a girl's lonely heart or her dreams.. Love it

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12muddy
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posted November 02, 2016 01:18 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for 12muddy     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I love it. Very beautiful.

It makes me feel similarly to when I got to the end of "Alice through the looking glass".

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