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posted December 24, 2016 07:41 PM            

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Friendship

I see you as a friend
taking the form of a bird
flying outside my window
into the world
And I shall miss you
when you take your freedom
Perhaps I shall remember
to claim my own
From outside my window
I shall observe
with different eyes
I'll grow wings
Follow a dream or two
into space
Perchance we could meet
and I'd remember
the friend you used to be
even before
I was free
The friend
you've always been

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posted December 25, 2016 08:07 AM            

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wow nostalgic one...reminds me of a friend of mine..

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posted December 25, 2016 05:49 PM            

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Thanks for feedback thequeen

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posted December 30, 2016 09:20 AM            

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Love this Ayelet

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posted December 31, 2016 10:50 PM            

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Thanks a bunch!

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posted January 04, 2017 06:11 PM            

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You wrote another poem with 'window' imagery a long while ago?..

The bird, the window, freedom....
Reminds me of Kriyananda's Flute song.

But that might not be what your poem is about.

I always enjoy your poems, Ayelet.

(music) Krishna's Flute (Swami Kriyananda, instrumental-- guitar, violin, flute) [4:16] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wNYezcFgdyA

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posted January 06, 2017 08:57 AM            

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Loves it!

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posted January 08, 2017 08:01 PM            

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Thank you, Mirage and Randall

Mirage, what a lovely music! I enjoyed it so much...

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