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Topic: Two Islands in the city
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 383 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 21, 2017 07:11 PM
Two islands in the city So close to each other Yet too far to be united And no sense of harmonyThey belonged to the country They believed in the same How soon the differences came And broke the bridge of love One spoke with silence One just moved away Yet the memory never faded The togetherness did The sea is long and wide The streets are all narrow They are on the same neighborhood Yet they kept the burden of sorrow Yes I watch you and cry Once you were my friend Now I can barely recall Your novels of surrealist dreams Two islands in the city So close to each other Yet too far to be united And no sense of harmony
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 2211 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 21, 2017 08:33 PM
So full of longing, direct and sincere writing and message..IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1570 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted January 22, 2017 08:44 AM
Thoughtful view of differencesIP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 6940 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 22, 2017 04:02 PM
(I posted after Ayelet... guess my post poofed?!) IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 74747 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 26, 2017 11:49 AM
Reminds me of political parties.IP: Logged |