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Topic: Alone at 3am. Again.
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I.am.awesome Newflake Posts: 5 From: Registered: Feb 2017
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posted February 26, 2017 08:53 PM
3 amAlone again Another night With myself In empty light I dream of love Heavy breath racy Giggles in sheets dark rain'd intimacy A lazy paw around my neck My arms reach out and pull in This strength encircles you Now safe within I hold you deep inside me As you held me in you Circles in circles Our energy flows through But reality intrudes This bed is empty, always empty The sheets abandoned My arms are crippled These muscles broken and spasmed Unwanted, undesirable Day after day Year after year Minute by minute By myself IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1618 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted February 27, 2017 07:32 PM
Can relate to this on occasion, myself. I like your ability to reveal in a real sense just how those empty hours feel.
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 2298 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted February 27, 2017 09:55 PM
Full of emotion, so tangible, heart rending. IP: Logged |
I.am.awesome Newflake Posts: 5 From: Registered: Feb 2017
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posted February 27, 2017 09:56 PM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty:
Can relate to this on occasion, myself. I like your ability to reveal in a real sense just how those empty hours feel.
THANK YOU! I want to write more about what I'm going through, and I want to recite it, but I am afraid that because I am a man, if I talk about these things, especially the anger and pain, then people will freak out. But when I write, it lets out a lot of the terrible pressure. IP: Logged |
I.am.awesome Newflake Posts: 5 From: Registered: Feb 2017
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posted February 27, 2017 09:57 PM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Full of emotion, so tangible, heart rending.
Do you think I could read this in a crowd of people? IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 405 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted February 27, 2017 10:08 PM
I am a man, and as I learned how to sing my songs, and played them to the crowds, my life became so much better all around, met a lot of people, got lots of great experiences, and it releases a lot of pressure, fears and expectations.The point is, you can do it, let yourself try, it can be a very rewarding experience. IP: Logged |
I.am.awesome Newflake Posts: 5 From: Registered: Feb 2017
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posted February 27, 2017 11:00 PM
quote: Originally posted by LF DX: I am a man, and as I learned how to sing my songs, and played them to the crowds, my life became so much better all around, met a lot of people, got lots of great experiences, and it releases a lot of pressure, fears and expectations.The point is, you can do it, let yourself try, it can be a very rewarding experience.
I'm laughing because I started to write you a reply that said I wasn't afraid of how people felt about what I wrote, I have no problem engaging with people, what I am frightened of is being arrested. And as I wrote that I started laughing both because I realized how ridiculous that scenario is, and also because I realized that's probably the best thing that any poet or writer could experience. I mean, lets' face it, Oscar Wilde would have loved it if he got arrested and executed for soemthing he wrote. Now that I think of it, the only thing I should really be afraid of is if people yawn! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 2298 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted February 28, 2017 02:10 PM
quote: Originally posted by I.am.awesome: I'm laughing because I started to write you a reply that said I wasn't afraid of how people felt about what I wrote, I have no problem engaging with people, what I am frightened of is being arrested.And as I wrote that I started laughing both because I realized how ridiculous that scenario is, and also because I realized that's probably the best thing that any poet or writer could experience. I mean, lets' face it, Oscar Wilde would have [b]loved it if he got arrested and executed for soemthing he wrote. Now that I think of it, the only thing I should really be afraid of is if people yawn![/B]
Indeed. Arrested? What the freaking for? Yea, sure, as LF DX said, let it out!
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 76420 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 08, 2017 05:40 PM
Been there.IP: Logged | |