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Amonuet Knowflake Posts: 49 From: Edmonton, Alberta Registered: Apr 2017
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posted April 11, 2017 01:11 PM
ACT I -SUNSAILS All the silver-lings, on the torn pages, of our bittersweet chapters.I hear a knock, at this luminary door. I know your hands are thirsty, are you ready to board? Is it 69 days, or years? I ponder, does it matter - with cold dirt on your ears? Oh, these fleshy casts - our spirits hung! Oh, is all lost? As we sail across the Rising sun?
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2427 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 11, 2017 07:41 PM
Welcome, Amonuet! It's great to have a new voice in this forum. I loved reading your poem. By the way, what did you mean by 69 days or years?IP: Logged |
Amonuet Knowflake Posts: 49 From: Edmonton, Alberta Registered: Apr 2017
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posted April 11, 2017 08:12 PM
Good evening Aveylet! Thank you so much for the welcome! It has been a long time since I have shared any of my writing, especially my poetry haha. 69 days, or years? That is a good question haha. Perhaps I get lost in time, still feeling the remnants of other past lives echoing out into this one? The number is an intimate reoccurring theme for me. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2427 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 12, 2017 09:05 AM
You're welcome. I'm glad you share it. So, I see the number 69 has a personal connotation to it. And you cannot really decipher it from the poem itself. So it's almost like an intimate signature of sorts.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1644 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted April 12, 2017 05:18 PM
Welcome, welcome, welcome.. Thanks for bringing your poems for us to enjoy! This is exquisite.IP: Logged |
Amonuet Knowflake Posts: 49 From: Edmonton, Alberta Registered: Apr 2017
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posted April 14, 2017 06:09 PM
quote: You're welcome. I'm glad you share it. So, I see the number 69 has a personal connotation to it. And you cannot really decipher it from the poem itself. So it's almost like an intimate signature of sorts.
Oh my, yes you are spot on! 69 is even in my phone number haha. And Pearlty, thank you for the warm welcome! I feel blessed to be on this forum, its wonderful to share work between artists. <3 It's what I live for!
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 7578 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted April 23, 2017 01:03 AM
quote: Originally posted by Amonuet: ACT I -SUNSAILS All the silver-lings, on the torn pages, of our bittersweet chapters.I hear a knock, at this luminary door. I know your hands are thirsty, are you ready to board? Is it 69 days, or years? I ponder, does it matter - with cold dirt on your ears? Oh, these fleshy casts - our spirits hung! Oh, is all lost? As we sail across the Rising sun?
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 79078 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 24, 2017 08:22 AM
Welcome!IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 79078 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 30, 2017 06:53 PM
I like all three Acts.IP: Logged |
whitewitch111 Knowflake Posts: 3397 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted May 07, 2017 01:20 AM
Wonderful. IP: Logged |