posted June 04, 2017 01:46 AM            

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Originally posted by Pearlty:

Caught up on what I missed over the weekend and today... Excellent whitewitch!

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posted June 04, 2017 07:14 PM            

Maybe you have youtube-buddies who could consider creating little movies of these scenes? You'd probably get yourself a following! (But that would be a huge project! -- Keep Writing. That's what's important.)

Make sure to copyright this material.
You could probably write screenplays some day too, from these.

posted June 10, 2017 07:07 PM            

So! LOL. The girls in your setting are going to church every week now?... Ha!~ I LOVE IT!
(humor) Better Watch out now??? --
'Bad-Girls gone Good' can make the Best kind of Converts! *wink. Huge-Grin* *Mellow *

Anyways... you're really good at writing!

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If any of this has any reflection of the kind of childhood you went through, I feel pained-sorrow for the kind of chaotic parenting atmosphere you went through.

For parts of your texts, your scenes--
I imaginatively saw settings of scenes from Girl, Interrupted (Angelina Jolie) in my head. Some of the dark parts of that movie remind me of flavor-pieces from your story.

While reading your piece, I've also recalled scenes from some very late-night wee-hours TV stations-- the ones depicting stories with some darkly-lit settings... I felt here that I could have overlaid your conversations and actions from your scripts into those settings, same characters used.

I'm hoping this is therapeutic for you. Tons of material!!

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As far as me and writing?
I had worked on editing, tweaking, compiling, and basically fleshing-out some other people's writings. Proof-reading.
They were published by through the authors privately, and circulated in certain circles-- even going around the globe.
(Main areas were study guides for religious college(pentecostal); metaphysically channeled works; and compiled the rudiments of a biography on new-age birthing philosophies.)
Some short compositions.
A small crude handful of poems that I illustrated with pastels, artwork, collage-work.
I've forgotten now, but one (maybe two) of the poems was(were) accepted in a vanity-publication of collection of poetry one year. ...
I kept journals for several decades.
Then also, a collection of small book of personal prayers.

Other than that?
I have my posts around LL, and some from website/forums I'd belonged to before this one.
(Kept copies of most of those site's writings, numbered Titled and organized in binders-- similar topics as I do here. Only difference is that I've been able to add songs to enhance or punctuate my posts while here at LL.)