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whitewitch111 Knowflake Posts: 3399 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted May 08, 2017 12:06 AM
You never thought I meant to put a bullet in your head, But I stuck a dagger Into your sweet heart, You let yourself think I wanted to kill you Because I already had inside, When the blade was removed The blood gushed forth; But I stopped it quickly. I am getting to work; Sewing, sewing, sewing, I feel no remorse; It only for the babe I am owed, Sewing up your heat, But first I tuck them in To a never ending sleep Beneath the tree I once planted It was you not me. 'Go to your father, you lie with him, not me.' I kiss them all Sweet angel baby's My girl almost literally, Maybe I'm like Father McKenzey Wiping the dirt from his hands as he walks from the grave; No one was saved, No one was saved, No one was saved, The last few stitches You are buried beneath the tree No one was saved I think he cares, I think he loves But he doesn't enough, Hurts of mine own Are taken out on you By both of us, Though we swore as children never to do that. Isn't it it funny? I've grown hard to your tears I would lie if I said I loved you Right now anyway You pass me by without glance, Not one I love you Or praise of my face, No...No..It's them Only with them may I ever love you But like Cronus you swallowed them whole, I see her emerge From the frozen snow That is now your kundalini "Please don't leave me mommy," she hollers, 'I am scared.' I kiss her head I tuck her back into her coffin bed, I tell her the story of Rapunzel, So that she may dream endlessly of a fairy tail. And now I leave They are fast asleep in the earth, I sew back your heart And leave in despondent defeat
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2434 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 08, 2017 07:20 PM
Heart tearing. Honest, full of emotion IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 7588 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted May 09, 2017 12:32 AM
Amazing work, WhiteWitch. You move and process imagery so well.I recognized a few lines that hint at a song. Nice choice, too. (music) Eleanor Rigby (The Beatles) [2:16] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=twFbweJfUUo IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 79250 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 10, 2017 10:39 AM
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1648 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted May 10, 2017 11:14 PM
word for word, a soul stripping journey IP: Logged | |