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LF DX
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posted December 18, 2017 11:35 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Time passes byÖ in the avenue
Slowly it forgets that you even exist
Donít try to feign resistance
Youíll soon pay your dues

Youíre comfortably bored with life
And the leaves are falling
One day youíll be one of them
As green turns into yellow

Someday youíll miss the train
The one that gets you home
And youíll be lost in the city
With no one to depend on

And the dream you want the most
You know it will have a cost
Donít fear the calling
Donít fear the calling

And the one you deeply love
She doesnít know who you are
Have you thought sheís just a star
Too far for you to reach

You can send all the signs
All the wonderful things
Art is just an excuse my friend
Life will wake you up soon

The truth is so much better
When you say what you really mean
Donít hide inside your fears
Donít waste your golden years

And freedom is an excuse
If you canít handle yourself
Weíre all in this together
Ours is the world to share

Time passes byÖ in the avenue
Slowly it forgets that you even exist
Donít try to feign resistance
Youíll soon pay your dues

All that you desire
All that you despise
Is all up there waiting
Get up before is too late

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mirage29
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posted December 18, 2017 05:00 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
wow... incredible synthesis of so many things
really fine.

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Randall
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posted January 27, 2018 07:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Ayelet
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posted January 27, 2018 08:17 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi LF DX. Your lyrics (It seems to me you composed this piece?) seem to express two contradictory emotions: despair and hope. The first rules the first part of the poem, and hope rules the rest. Hope and motivation. It seem to me you express a heavy tone at the beginning, and then cheer yourself. Am I right? It is as if you are disillusioned, then shower yourself and your readers with hopeful wisdom. But there is something more. You say the end is dark, sorrow will arrive, so you better take advatage of what one has right now. Yes, I wasn't accurate in the beginning. I guess because the heavy tone was influencing me. I would have thought, reading certain lines of yours, it is all in vain, so why even try? (If you are really doomed to miss the train) But you keep believing in something - the human spirit, perhaps?
What sign is your moon?

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LF DX
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posted January 28, 2018 11:55 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Moon in Aqua squaring my stellium in scorpio in the 8th house

And in certain ways, yeah, it's what I'm trying to convey in this writing

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Ayelet
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posted January 28, 2018 03:43 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I thought you had an optimistic moon. Now confirmed. It also makes you a humanitarian and broadens your emotional outlook away from the personal, onward to a world of ideas and ideals.
Is the moon in the 8th house, or the stellium?

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LF DX
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posted January 28, 2018 05:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Sun, mars and pluto in 8th, the moon is in the 11th house

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Ayelet
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posted January 28, 2018 07:24 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
So your rising sign is Aries, which gives you plenty of creative energy. I capture you as a knight, actually, but a knight that is both direct and indirect: you are hard to get to know. Your moon is very sociable, so you can make many strangers your friends, but you keep yourself a secret. This secrecy lends you a powerful aura. Along with that, you may wish sometimes it would be easier to communicate your wishes. And that is, perhaps, what makes you a poet and a musician.

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LF DX
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posted January 28, 2018 08:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
In fact, I have a Pisces Rising at 26 degrees more or less, I don't feel like an Aries rising at all

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Randall
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posted January 29, 2018 09:03 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
We know a lot more about you now. It suits you and fits you well.

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posted January 29, 2018 09:14 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
So I guessed wrong. Anyhow, do you identify with some of the things I wrote, which stem from your scorpio stellium square your Aqua moon in the 11th?

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LF DX
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posted January 29, 2018 12:19 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
More or less, but without being that pessimist, it was more of a calling, of facing the inevitable, the fears, the world around you.

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posted February 11, 2018 07:08 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by LF DX:
More or less, but without being that pessimist, it was more of a calling, of facing the inevitable, the fears, the world around you.

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