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Topic: Time Pases By
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 538 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 18, 2017 11:35 AM
Time passes by… in the avenue Slowly it forgets that you even exist Don’t try to feign resistance You’ll soon pay your duesYou’re comfortably bored with life And the leaves are falling One day you’ll be one of them As green turns into yellow Someday you’ll miss the train The one that gets you home And you’ll be lost in the city With no one to depend on And the dream you want the most You know it will have a cost Don’t fear the calling Don’t fear the calling And the one you deeply love She doesn’t know who you are Have you thought she’s just a star Too far for you to reach You can send all the signs All the wonderful things Art is just an excuse my friend Life will wake you up soon The truth is so much better When you say what you really mean Don’t hide inside your fears Don’t waste your golden years And freedom is an excuse If you can’t handle yourself We’re all in this together Ours is the world to share Time passes by… in the avenue Slowly it forgets that you even exist Don’t try to feign resistance You’ll soon pay your dues All that you desire All that you despise Is all up there waiting Get up before is too late IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 9196 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 18, 2017 05:00 PM
wow... incredible synthesis of so many things really fine.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 91806 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 27, 2018 07:34 PM
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2666 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 27, 2018 08:17 PM
Hi LF DX. Your lyrics (It seems to me you composed this piece?) seem to express two contradictory emotions: despair and hope. The first rules the first part of the poem, and hope rules the rest. Hope and motivation. It seem to me you express a heavy tone at the beginning, and then cheer yourself. Am I right? It is as if you are disillusioned, then shower yourself and your readers with hopeful wisdom. But there is something more. You say the end is dark, sorrow will arrive, so you better take advatage of what one has right now. Yes, I wasn't accurate in the beginning. I guess because the heavy tone was influencing me. I would have thought, reading certain lines of yours, it is all in vain, so why even try? (If you are really doomed to miss the train) But you keep believing in something - the human spirit, perhaps? What sign is your moon?IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 538 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 28, 2018 11:55 AM
Moon in Aqua squaring my stellium in scorpio in the 8th houseAnd in certain ways, yeah, it's what I'm trying to convey in this writing IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2666 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 28, 2018 03:43 PM
I thought you had an optimistic moon. Now confirmed. It also makes you a humanitarian and broadens your emotional outlook away from the personal, onward to a world of ideas and ideals. Is the moon in the 8th house, or the stellium?IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 538 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 28, 2018 05:28 PM
Sun, mars and pluto in 8th, the moon is in the 11th houseIP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2666 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 28, 2018 07:24 PM
So your rising sign is Aries, which gives you plenty of creative energy. I capture you as a knight, actually, but a knight that is both direct and indirect: you are hard to get to know. Your moon is very sociable, so you can make many strangers your friends, but you keep yourself a secret. This secrecy lends you a powerful aura. Along with that, you may wish sometimes it would be easier to communicate your wishes. And that is, perhaps, what makes you a poet and a musician.IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 538 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 28, 2018 08:11 PM
In fact, I have a Pisces Rising at 26 degrees more or less, I don't feel like an Aries rising at allIP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 91806 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 29, 2018 09:03 AM
We know a lot more about you now. It suits you and fits you well.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2666 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 29, 2018 09:14 AM
So I guessed wrong. Anyhow, do you identify with some of the things I wrote, which stem from your scorpio stellium square your Aqua moon in the 11th? IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 538 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 29, 2018 12:19 PM
More or less, but without being that pessimist, it was more of a calling, of facing the inevitable, the fears, the world around you.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 91806 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 11, 2018 07:08 PM
quote: Originally posted by LF DX: More or less, but without being that pessimist, it was more of a calling, of facing the inevitable, the fears, the world around you.
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