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LeonisStar
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posted May 01, 2018 11:33 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for LeonisStar     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Well here I am, spreading myself thin again
I'll sin again
Cut the wires, rearrange them like a synonym
My heart beats fast, my footsteps quicker
will I ever learn that the sick only get sicker
because medicine is temporary
splattered on the porcelain rim
the only thing constant
is the way the light steadily dims
And i'll run so ******* far
circling terminals, exhaling fear
leave my heart behind and do away with all these years
but nothing really matters, not these words, i know it's true
No matter where I run
i'll still wish my constant would be you.

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Randall
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posted May 02, 2018 07:10 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Randall
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posted May 03, 2018 04:56 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Love the last two lines.

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Ayelet
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posted May 03, 2018 09:41 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi LeonisStar, I like your poem, it has a groove to it, there is a bitter taste that is softened and altered in the end. The constant is first introduced as negative in essence, then as your ideal and your love or soulmate (or soul-friend). Thanks for posting

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mirage29
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posted May 05, 2018 09:53 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
LeonisStar

The feelings you describe are so deep and full.

I responded to your other poem before seeing this one.
- http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum17/HTML/003440.html


It's been a while since you were here last.
(a few years?)

I remember a little of some of those other things you wrote. (Our search engine is down now, otherwise I would have linked them.)

Are you doing okay? ....
(Are you safe?)

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LeonisStar
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posted May 09, 2018 04:10 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LeonisStar     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi Mirage!

I'm shocked and honored that you remember me. I am doing well, & safe, thank you for asking I tend to only write when i'm upset or overcome with emotion whether that be good or bad, and I was in a long term relationship that became very monotonous and i didn't have many emotions to express at the time. Got out of that in january and met someone new, fell for them very unexpectedly hence the "spreading myself thin again". Sorry for the rambling, i appreciate you!!

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Randall
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posted May 10, 2018 05:17 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Randall
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posted May 22, 2018 11:12 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Originally posted by LeonisStar:
Hi Mirage!

I'm shocked and honored that you remember me. I am doing well, & safe, thank you for asking I tend to only write when i'm upset or overcome with emotion whether that be good or bad, and I was in a long term relationship that became very monotonous and i didn't have many emotions to express at the time. Got out of that in january and met someone new, fell for them very unexpectedly hence the "spreading myself thin again". Sorry for the rambling, i appreciate you!!


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mirage29
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posted May 22, 2018 12:07 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
LeonisStar!
I appreciate you too ..

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Randall
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posted June 06, 2018 10:30 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I appreciate you both.

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Randall
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posted June 17, 2018 09:02 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Randall
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posted July 08, 2018 06:54 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Bump!

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