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Ayelet
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posted July 05, 2018 07:22 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Alteration

Sombody's knocking at my door
I feel alive because he comes
And takes my breath away

'Tis a solemn solitude
Filled with mice and what else
I cry and a baby's born
In another world

What could you have done for me?
I need naught, let me be
A Silhouette of shattered glasses over musing views

He, who has the gift of speaking, must be
Silent now. Ravens weeping. I
Am leaving bliss for what tastes better
In a tongue undivided, uttered, altered in our mind

And everybody laughs

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mirage29
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posted July 05, 2018 08:07 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Wow. That's powerful, and puzzle-like.

Reminds me of the kinds of things Linda writes about? The issues revolving around immortality.

This was a Goober~like treat.., and yet, leaves me with a kind of shudder or a chill.

So good to see your Creative Work, Ayelet!

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Randall
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posted July 06, 2018 09:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Ayelet
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posted July 07, 2018 07:25 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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