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Topic: Darkness
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thequeen Moderator Posts: 4860 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted July 10, 2018 10:58 AM
Delve into me and pretend you have never seen, The violent flames that burn in their souls, And please walk with me till the end of tunnel, Where I fiercely fight for my own shadow, The darkness engulfs the silence of light, And twinkles with its soul adeptly to rise, And holds your hands to sing of its glory, The darkness describes the Bible holy, Enchanted with its prayer I run and cry, “Hey darkness, stop,” don’t turn me blind, But look it elopes, trying to swallow the light, There is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries.
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2788 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted July 10, 2018 02:06 PM
Beautiful, thequeen, so full of hope and courage. Good to see you here IP: Logged |
thequeen Moderator Posts: 4860 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted July 11, 2018 02:08 AM
Thank you Ayelet, I plan to start writing meaningful verses.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 1840 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted July 12, 2018 02:31 PM
Beautifully dark, love this IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 10399 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted July 12, 2018 09:53 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by thequeen:Delve into me and pretend you have never seen, x And please walk with me till the end of tunnel, x The darkness engulfs the silence of light, x And holds your hands to sing of its glory, x Enchanted with its prayer I run and cry, x But look it elopes, trying to swallow the light, xxx xThe violent flames that burn in their souls, xWhere I fiercely fight for my own shadow, xAnd twinkles with its soul adeptly to rise, xThe darkness describes the Bible holy, x“Hey darkness, stop,” don’t turn me blind, xThere is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries. yyy Hi Thequeen! Good to see you posting verse again. I found your verses quite interesting, while it kept shifting back and forth for me. So I took the liberty of taking every other verse {marked with x }, and layered them together. As you might see? Every other line seemed to belong together in a similar energy?? For me, was almost as though one line is a tiny more masculine, while the other may seem a bit more feminine? Not a difference until I stacked them together? What do you think? Am I off... ? Am I doing eclipse Moon energy??? LOL (right now) This is my favorite line. There is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries. (music) Lean On Me (Bill Withers, Glee Cast, lyrics) [4:13] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81We8X91VtQ
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thequeen Moderator Posts: 4860 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted July 13, 2018 01:40 PM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty:
Beautifully dark, love this
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 102346 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 13, 2018 04:02 PM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty:
Beautifully dark, love this
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thequeen Moderator Posts: 4860 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted July 16, 2018 11:18 AM
mirage, I loved your take on the poetry. After you put the verses together it made better sense.For some reason I find it synchronous with the energy you elaborated. I was trying to describe it with the negative energy that opposes the positive one. Great musical btw IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 10399 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted July 16, 2018 04:13 PM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 102346 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 27, 2018 06:06 PM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 102346 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 29, 2018 02:34 PM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 102346 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted October 19, 2018 04:25 PM
quote: Originally posted by thequeen: mirage, I loved your take on the poetry. After you put the verses together it made better sense.For some reason I find it synchronous with the energy you elaborated. I was trying to describe it with the negative energy that opposes the positive one. Great musical btw
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