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thequeen
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posted July 10, 2018 10:58 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Delve into me and pretend you have never seen,
The violent flames that burn in their souls,
And please walk with me till the end of tunnel,
Where I fiercely fight for my own shadow,
The darkness engulfs the silence of light,
And twinkles with its soul adeptly to rise,
And holds your hands to sing of its glory,
The darkness describes the Bible holy,
Enchanted with its prayer I run and cry,
“Hey darkness, stop,” don’t turn me blind,
But look it elopes, trying to swallow the light,
There is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries.

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Ayelet
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posted July 10, 2018 02:06 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Beautiful, thequeen, so full of hope and courage. Good to see you here

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thequeen
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posted July 11, 2018 02:08 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you Ayelet, I plan to start writing meaningful verses.

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Pearlty
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posted July 12, 2018 02:31 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Beautifully dark, love this

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mirage29
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posted July 12, 2018 09:53 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
[QUOTE]Originally posted by thequeen:

Delve into me and pretend you have never seen,
x
And please walk with me till the end of tunnel,
x
The darkness engulfs the silence of light,
x
And holds your hands to sing of its glory,
x
Enchanted with its prayer I run and cry,
x
But look it elopes, trying to swallow the light,
xxx

xThe violent flames that burn in their souls,
xWhere I fiercely fight for my own shadow,
xAnd twinkles with its soul adeptly to rise,
xThe darkness describes the Bible holy,
x“Hey darkness, stop,” don’t turn me blind,
xThere is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries.

yyy

Hi Thequeen!
Good to see you posting verse again.

I found your verses quite interesting, while it kept shifting back and forth for me.

So I took the liberty of taking every other verse {marked with x }, and layered them together. As you might see? Every other line seemed to belong together in a similar energy?? For me, was almost as though one line is a tiny more masculine, while the other may seem a bit more feminine? Not a difference until I stacked them together?

What do you think?
Am I off... ?
Am I doing eclipse Moon energy??? LOL (right now)

This is my favorite line.

There is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries.


(music) Lean On Me (Bill Withers, Glee Cast, lyrics) [4:13] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81We8X91VtQ

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thequeen
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posted July 13, 2018 01:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Pearlty:

Beautifully dark, love this


Thank You Pearlty.

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Randall
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posted July 13, 2018 04:02 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Pearlty:

Beautifully dark, love this


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thequeen
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posted July 16, 2018 11:18 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
mirage, I loved your take on the poetry. After you put the verses together it made better sense.

For some reason I find it synchronous with the energy you elaborated. I was trying to describe it with the negative energy that opposes the positive one.

Great musical btw

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mirage29
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posted July 16, 2018 04:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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