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Topic: It's The End Of Me
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Ayelet
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posted September 10, 2018 06:32 PM
  
It's The End Of MeI feel I exist
In a very deep sense
As if I were water
Under the sink
And this pain
Couldn't be
Oblivious of me
Again. People under control
Reduce thinking to shreds
Pieces of agony
Little stones on your heart
Very delicate
So alone
Centered in emotion
Calling you names
Grasping a truth so flimsy So am I
Resting between your arms
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mirage29
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posted September 10, 2018 10:36 PM
Your vulnerability... is Beautiful.   Are you upset, Ayelet?? -------------
Virtually holding-space with you here--,
holding you snug and safe, and soothing you,
.. just rock you for a while. (music) We Will Rock You (Sally Harmon, instrumental music, lullaby) [2:53] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Oz6_jt5XqE Rest, and feel Comfort remaining with you.
 lit a candle ... *~~~~~~~~~ Are you celebrating the New Year where you are?
"May you have a Good and Sweet new year.”
Stay Safe Sounds like inner-work. Good solid strong inner-work. 'Little stones on the heart' I know that this is a Jewish holiday.
Part of it has to do with sorrow for sins, and making atonement? Sometimes people tend to be too hard on themselves, Ayelet. IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted September 10, 2018 10:49 PM
Thanks dear.
I am celebrating, and getting renewed inside out. Shana tova IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted September 10, 2018 11:09 PM
Oh, wonderful... May it be a Good one for you.
Power, & Blessings. Have a good (and sacred) holiday.
Shana tova IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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posted September 11, 2018 07:50 AM
The ending was like pow!! on this ayelet, and so true on vulnerability.. I can relate. :IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted September 14, 2018 12:40 PM
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mirage29
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posted September 14, 2018 02:33 PM
Ayelet .. you leave images and lines that are quite haunting. They follow me for a really long time. Your various works (over the time you've been here) pop back into my head from time to time.'Little stones' ….
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Ayelet
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posted September 15, 2018 05:17 PM
Thank you Mirage, I'm glad I can share. IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted September 15, 2018 09:57 PM
I can relate. I don't miss that vulnerability.IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted September 15, 2018 09:57 PM
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Randall
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posted September 16, 2018 02:46 PM
I take it back. Maybe I do.IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted September 16, 2018 04:39 PM
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Randall
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posted September 17, 2018 04:47 PM
Every Stripe needs his Yellow.IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted September 17, 2018 08:57 PM
It can make you feel alive. IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted September 17, 2018 10:30 PM
 (music) Love is Like A Butterfly (Dolly Parton) [2:21] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ywFx-nGZXxI Randall's "Stripe and Yellow" Story REF
- http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum15/HTML/004195.html
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thequeen
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posted September 21, 2018 04:33 AM
"People under control
Reduce thinking to shreds
Pieces of agony"Lately I have trying to weigh where do I stand in terms of my depth. Have I lost the spark or is there too much rationalising on my part? This verse of yours makes you the master especially with these few lines. Are you the teacher, how do you know? Shredded thoughts, agonising life? Is there a message you are trying to convey? Lol, these are too many questions  Thank you for sharing your precious work with us IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted September 23, 2018 01:46 PM
Thank you thequeen
I don't usually like to interpret. It's what it is. It's what Came to me. IP: Logged |
thequeen
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posted September 23, 2018 05:50 PM
quote:
Originally posted by Ayelet:
Thank you thequeen
I don't usually like to interpret. It's what it is. It's what Came to me.
Indeed! Thanks 
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