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posted March 11, 2019 10:39 PM            

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Man of duality, please eat your words
Swallow your own acidic tongue
You spit such venom, under the guise of truth
Since you see our last song was sung

You will not let the dysfunction go
You insist on hanging on
No matter how you betrayed me
You can't see yourself as wrong

You sink into delusions
The haze of what you feel you deserve
As you stand there so self-righteous
You stomp on my last nerve...

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posted March 12, 2019 08:30 AM            

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Powerful.

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posted March 12, 2019 01:26 PM            

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Sounds pretty sad..
Projecting a lot of
negative energy...

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal

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posted March 13, 2019 02:30 AM            

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There is a lot of hurt in this poem, and we get that feeling pretty strong... The image of a person eating his own words is beautiful.

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posted March 13, 2019 06:24 PM            

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Originally posted by Ayelet:
There is a lot of hurt in this poem, and we get that feeling pretty strong... The image of a person eating his own words is beautiful.

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Thank you, Ayelet. It was, appropriately enough, about a Gemini.

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posted March 13, 2019 07:06 PM            

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Tears are very cleansing
for this kind of thing..

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal

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posted March 13, 2019 09:10 PM            

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Originally posted by ballerina:
Tears are very cleansing
for this kind of thing..

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Believe me, I have cried plenty over this and him...it messed up an entire work day as I was so angry and upset.

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posted March 13, 2019 09:45 PM            

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my heart goes out to you...

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal

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posted March 13, 2019 09:54 PM            

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Originally posted by ballerina:
my heart goes out to you...

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Thank you, dear friend

I hope to put as much emotional distance between this pain and my plans on the horizon as possible, for both my sanity and my kiddos. May more joy and love be around the corner

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