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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake

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From: MidWest :)
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posted May 29, 2019 12:18 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
It took a stranger's words to drive home
Your lack of concern
Apathy is what remains
Of a heart that once yearned

You will not love me
The way I need
I cannot care
If you cry or bleed

The circles of our lives
Have the barest overlap
You don't desire to find
A place on my map

I read into your kindness
Took your warmth to my heart
It's better that I never
Acted as if we had a start

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Check out my poetry! <3

https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet

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Randall
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posted May 31, 2019 11:50 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake

Posts: 1082
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted May 31, 2019 12:07 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you, friend

Writing off the Fish, as best I can...

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Check out my poetry! <3

https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet

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mirage29
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posted May 31, 2019 03:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
what's done is done …
and a Scalpel leave scars

Cuts Both Ways

REF

quote:
VA-A Poem "Scalpel"
It took a stranger's words to drive home
Your lack of concern
Apathy is what remains
Of a heart that once yearned
You will not love me
The way I need
I cannot care
If you cry or bleed
The circles of our lives
Have the barest overlap
You don't desire to find
A place on my map
I read into your kindness
Took your warmth to my heart
It's better that I never
Acted as if we had a start

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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake

Posts: 1082
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted May 31, 2019 04:50 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by mirage29:
what's done is done …
and a Scalpel leave scars

Cuts Both Ways


What do you mean exactly, mirage? Please explain...

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mirage29
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posted May 31, 2019 05:47 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Cuts Both Ways is a title of a song … and a Scalpel (name of your poem) is a knife that a surgeon uses-- for healing purposes.

I thought about that song after seeing your series of related poems, and the conversations with some people about your feelings.

(music) Cuts Both Ways (Gloria Estefan, 1990, lyrics) [3:17] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkpyBlEwTPk

lyrics
It cuts both ways
Our love is like a knife that cuts both ways
It's driven deep into my heart each time
That I realize

How it cuts both ways
Can't be together, cannot live apart
We're heading straight into a broken heart
But I can't stop

'Cause I feel too much to let you go
I'm hurting you and it's hard I know
To stay and fight for what we've got
Knowing it'll never be good enough

'Cause you and I are dangerous
We want too much and life ain't that way
Don't ask for more, you'd be a fool
Haven't we already broken every rule?

It cuts both ways
We're in too deep for sorry alibis
Can't have regrets or even question why
We can't say goodbye

Because it cuts both ways
No more illusions of the love we make
No sacrifice would ever be too great
If you would stay

'Cause I feel too much to let you go
I'm hurting you and it's hard I know
To stay and fight for what we've got
Knowing it'll never be good enough

'Cause you and I are dangerous
We want too much and life ain't that way
Don't ask for more, don't be a fool
Haven't we already broken every rule?

Cuts both ways
Our love is like a knife that cuts both ways
It's drivin' deep into my heart each time
I see we livin' the lie

And it cuts both ways
It cuts both ways
Cuts both ways
Cuts both ways

- http://www.lyrics.com/lyric/19614961/Cuts+Both+Ways/Cuts+Both+Ways

- http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/cut+both+ways

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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake

Posts: 1082
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted May 31, 2019 05:57 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by mirage29:
Cuts Both Ways is a title of a song … and a Scalpel (name of your poem) is a knife that a surgeon uses-- for healing purposes.

I thought about that song after seeing your series of related poems, and the conversations with some people about your feelings.

(music) Cuts Both Ways (Gloria Estefan, 1990, lyrics) [3:17] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkpyBlEwTPk

It cuts both ways
Our love is like a knife that cuts both ways
It's driven deep into my heart each time
That I realize

How it cuts both ways
Can't be together, cannot live apart
We're heading straight into a broken heart
But I can't stop

'Cause I feel too much to let you go
I'm hurting you and it's hard I know
To stay and fight for what we've got
Knowing it'll never be good enough

'Cause you and I are dangerous
We want too much and life ain't that way
Don't ask for more, you'd be a fool
Haven't we already broken every rule?

It cuts both ways
We're in too deep for sorry alibis
Can't have regrets or even question why
We can't say goodbye

Because it cuts both ways
No more illusions of the love we make
No sacrifice would ever be too great
If you would stay

'Cause I feel too much to let you go
I'm hurting you and it's hard I know
To stay and fight for what we've got
Knowing it'll never be good enough

'Cause you and I are dangerous
We want too much and life ain't that way
Don't ask for more, don't be a fool
Haven't we already broken every rule?

Cuts both ways
Our love is like a knife that cuts both ways
It's drivin' deep into my heart each time
I see we livin' the lie

And it cuts both ways
It cuts both ways
Cuts both ways
Cuts both ways

- http://www.lyrics.com/lyric/19614961/Cuts+Both+Ways/Cuts+Both+Ways



Thank you for sharing, mirage. I will give the song a listen when I get home. The gist of the lyrics make me sad... I guess I am hoping upon hope that I am somehow wrong about how this plays out...::sighs::

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Ayelet
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posted June 01, 2019 05:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
May you find the love you are yearning for in an unexpected way

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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake

Posts: 1082
From: MidWest :)
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posted June 01, 2019 09:35 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Ayelet:
May you find the love you are yearning for in an unexpected way

Thank you

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