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Topic: "Blip"
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1114 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted June 11, 2019 05:49 PM
Why did I miss you And why did I sigh? I'm barely on your radar As you pass me by...I need to pretend You're invisible to me I need to rein in My burning urge to flee This puzzling magnetism Muddles my mind Stuck in stasis Where I feel paralyzed and blind ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3064 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 13, 2019 06:02 PM
Melancholic. You need to pretend he's invisible, so you feel blind. You hold yourself from fleeing, so you feel paralyzed. You're attracted to him, while what you want to do is run away... Paradoxes. IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1114 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted June 13, 2019 09:15 PM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Melancholic. You need to pretend he's invisible, so you feel blind. You hold yourself from fleeing, so you feel paralyzed. You're attracted to him, while what you want to do is run away... Paradoxes.
TOTALLY paradoxical, Ayelet. I am struggling to find clarity, and direction in this situation... IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 114172 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 28, 2019 06:34 AM
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