Posts: 1114
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted June 13, 2019 09:08 PM            

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Your smug smile irks my self-esteem
As you correct my train of thought
There's nothing worse than superiority
On topics you think you've been taught

Point out my glaring errors
Remind me of where I dropped the ball
Your pointed critique leaves me reeling
and I'm disinclined to stand so tall...

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posted June 14, 2019 05:34 PM            

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It's good, actually, you are not to blame for superiority...

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From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted June 14, 2019 11:25 PM            

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Kinda good...and today was better. If I can not let the Mars in Sag energy irritate my Virgo sensibilities, I do better in not reacting.

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From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
Registered: Apr 2009

posted August 14, 2019 03:57 PM            

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Bad days create good poems.

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