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T O P I C R E V I E WDevilfishThe UnnamedI JUST HAVE SUCH A LONGING IN MY HEARTA LONGING in my heart LONGING in my heartthat it tears my soul aparta fool confused still proud i standas you turn away your handa lump of coal within my chest Hollow Heavy Dead in breastleave no stone unturned but meBlurr the Lines within my seaHoly Howling from the tormentPained Regret my wasted moment........DreamingAND IT TEARS MY SOUL APARTIT TEARS my soul apartTEARS my soul apartthis UNNAMED longing in my heart. (RAM)Bluemoon 26taurus pixelpixie*cries*SunChildI just read this..and I felt it, I actually felt tears welling up...I don't know why, but this fits me right now. It feels like my song..wierd. ------------------"The dream was always running ahead of me. To catch up, to live for a moment in unison with it, that was the miracle." Anaïs NinBluemoonyes it does feel like a song. future_uncertainI've been thinking about this poem since you first posted it the other day. I think it says a lot when someone's words get stuck in your head like that.whiterabbitI agree,it does ring in your ears once you finish reading it. Great writing!Devilfishi cried when i wrote it wowim in awe that it was felt
I JUST HAVE SUCH A LONGING IN MY HEARTA LONGING in my heart LONGING in my heartthat it tears my soul aparta fool confused still proud i standas you turn away your handa lump of coal within my chest Hollow Heavy Dead in breastleave no stone unturned but meBlurr the Lines within my seaHoly Howling from the tormentPained Regret my wasted moment........DreamingAND IT TEARS MY SOUL APARTIT TEARS my soul apartTEARS my soul apartthis UNNAMED longing in my heart. (RAM)
------------------"The dream was always running ahead of me. To catch up, to live for a moment in unison with it, that was the miracle." Anaïs Nin
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